Little Poems
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
I admire you for creating your own poetry style and format. Shows you are truly into your craft. I find your poem very delightful and fun. I love the photo. As always, I enjoy you mixing your two art forms. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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I admire you for creating your own poetry style and format. Shows you are truly into your craft. I find your poem very delightful and fun. I love the photo. As always, I enjoy you mixing your two art forms. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thank you for such nice encouragement.
Comment from Joan E.
Your title and fascinating photograph grabbed my attention. Thanks for sharing your new creation--you could sponsor a contest around it. I enjoyed the structure plus the rhymes, and you captured the scene and spirit well. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Your title and fascinating photograph grabbed my attention. Thanks for sharing your new creation--you could sponsor a contest around it. I enjoyed the structure plus the rhymes, and you captured the scene and spirit well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan. That's not a bad idea.
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Smiles. Keep warm during the Arctic Vortex! -Joan
Comment from rod007
An interesting poetic structure that did well in your poem where REJOICE is the exhortation. Rejoicing is fun especially when in dance. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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An interesting poetic structure that did well in your poem where REJOICE is the exhortation. Rejoicing is fun especially when in dance. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thank you rod. Ill take a chance, and dance.
Comment from Capricorn30
No doubt you were inspired!
Good concept--good creativity in writing of a statue dance;
The pumpkins blend in well with the orange foliage in the background;
It's a pretty picture--your poem complements it well.
Virgins and pumpkins, incorporate a dance, and create an excellent poem--I like it.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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No doubt you were inspired!
Good concept--good creativity in writing of a statue dance;
The pumpkins blend in well with the orange foliage in the background;
It's a pretty picture--your poem complements it well.
Virgins and pumpkins, incorporate a dance, and create an excellent poem--I like it.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thank you Margaret. Glad you enjoyed it. Since it snowed today, i guess the season is over for me. But a new one has started.
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You're always welcome, Tom. Is it okay if I address you as Tom or would you prefer Treischel?
Yes, I heard on the new this morning about the snowfall Minnesota received---ohhh, winter's here!
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Certainly call me Tom. All my friends do.
Comment from adewpearl
good internal rhyme in prance to the rhythm of the dance
good alliteration in celebrate the season
strong rhyming
throughout
I like the structure you've created
great celebratory, exuberant tone
:-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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good internal rhyme in prance to the rhythm of the dance
good alliteration in celebrate the season
strong rhyming
throughout
I like the structure you've created
great celebratory, exuberant tone
:-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thank you Brooke. I'm ecstatic that like my format.
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lots of folks make up lots of formats, and truth be told, I don't like many of them :-) This I like
