Comment from rod007

Excellent

A family walk in the fall brings out such joy in this poem, the form of which is interesting but it's the essence of it that captures the spirit of that season. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014

Thanks again rod.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Yep. Now is the time for many shared walks to drink in the colors. We are blessed to have some good woodland and Morton Arboretum down the road.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014

Thank you ravenblack. Aren't Aboretums awesome?

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

No better way to spend time with family than admiring autumn's hues;
"hold a child's hand"--together beholding God's colors as nature displays her boldest foliage.
A well-crafted writing, making me smile.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014

Thank you Margaret. If I made you smile, I'm pleased.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I really like this form of poetry, this is the first I recall seeing it. It really is fun to read, and although it may look easy to write I'm certain it can be difficult, so I'd say you did an excellent job with it!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014

Thank you Dawny

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ooo a new form..I don't know what to do with the plethora of syllable counts I just know what I like and that is a message..family and fun ...the greatest being out doors in natures beauty....it's a blessing
God bless

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2014

Thank you Kiwijenny, glad you liked it.