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Comment from bilzo
What a beautifully painful tribute to long term love. I'm not normally. outwardly emotional but my eyes welled up when I read and re-read.
Excellent
Bill
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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What a beautifully painful tribute to long term love. I'm not normally. outwardly emotional but my eyes welled up when I read and re-read.
Excellent
Bill
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for this one Bill
Gary
Comment from Aplgwest
Such an interesting photo. Sixty years of marriage is almost unheard of nowadays. My parents made it to 58, and my mother lived another 20 years. Her lifestyle the same but also very different without her husband. Your poem rings true with the emotion expressed. --Elaine
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Such an interesting photo. Sixty years of marriage is almost unheard of nowadays. My parents made it to 58, and my mother lived another 20 years. Her lifestyle the same but also very different without her husband. Your poem rings true with the emotion expressed. --Elaine
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you Elaine
Comment from JeffreyVPerry
This poem was difficult to read and probably to write as well. As I read it I looked to understand it, until your sudden ending. I then read it upside down and it was a lot better for me to digest. I cannot suggest that it would make better sense upside down, particularly after reading it first how you wrote it, but I do wonder if I wanted to have to get your tragic ending, like that. I am also so sorry!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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This poem was difficult to read and probably to write as well. As I read it I looked to understand it, until your sudden ending. I then read it upside down and it was a lot better for me to digest. I cannot suggest that it would make better sense upside down, particularly after reading it first how you wrote it, but I do wonder if I wanted to have to get your tragic ending, like that. I am also so sorry!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Maggieluv
Poignant message in such a short time. You have portrayed such an awful list in a few well chosen words. The picture complemented the verse without over-shadowing it - well done!
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Poignant message in such a short time. You have portrayed such an awful list in a few well chosen words. The picture complemented the verse without over-shadowing it - well done!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Rosebramble
You painted a wonderful picture of your loss and sadness. I like the artwork as it sets the mood. There is a meaningful message conveyed throughout your poem. Overall I liked the presentation.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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You painted a wonderful picture of your loss and sadness. I like the artwork as it sets the mood. There is a meaningful message conveyed throughout your poem. Overall I liked the presentation.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you Rose
Comment from granny goes viral
If this is true, I offer sympathy. How does one say "a lovely poem" for such a sad subject. I really don't know, do you? I do know that writing helps the memories fly and the heart cry.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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If this is true, I offer sympathy. How does one say "a lovely poem" for such a sad subject. I really don't know, do you? I do know that writing helps the memories fly and the heart cry.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Lulube
Calm before the storm I'm feeling, Your visions in passive statements of what has, is and to be senerios, you end with that statement that is the truth of all this pain. Sorry for your loss and for your grieving on the now void that is in your daily life. Hold onto what and who ever can be there for the time you will need to be able to settle all that is running amuck within you now. How ever long this will take is not important, only that you know this is what has to occur and will in time. You have to skip over the bottom and not let it drag you in.
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Calm before the storm I'm feeling, Your visions in passive statements of what has, is and to be senerios, you end with that statement that is the truth of all this pain. Sorry for your loss and for your grieving on the now void that is in your daily life. Hold onto what and who ever can be there for the time you will need to be able to settle all that is running amuck within you now. How ever long this will take is not important, only that you know this is what has to occur and will in time. You have to skip over the bottom and not let it drag you in.
lulube
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Again thank you for this
Gary
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welcome always around
lulube
Comment from drivenbackward
Ouch! That's good. Interestingly, you need to read the poem a second time, after knowing the conclusion, to really get it. You write some really good poetry.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Ouch! That's good. Interestingly, you need to read the poem a second time, after knowing the conclusion, to really get it. You write some really good poetry.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from lappmellott
Great job on the poem and I really loved the photograph you used with it. Death is always hard for those left behind. I'm not afraid of dying (whenever that may be) but I know my death will be hard on my husband and my family.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Great job on the poem and I really loved the photograph you used with it. Death is always hard for those left behind. I'm not afraid of dying (whenever that may be) but I know my death will be hard on my husband and my family.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from emrpoems
Filled with emotion and paints a vivid image of your loss by using very powerful descriptive language.
Fantastic presentation
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Filled with emotion and paints a vivid image of your loss by using very powerful descriptive language.
Fantastic presentation
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you
