Willow Tree
5-7-5 poem16 total reviews
Comment from Patti R.
How lovely this is! The willow is a favorite tree of mine, having grown up climbing and hiding in them. She does sleep until the wind blows and then she dances and dances!
Patti
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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How lovely this is! The willow is a favorite tree of mine, having grown up climbing and hiding in them. She does sleep until the wind blows and then she dances and dances!
Patti
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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Comment from kiwijenny
Cool imagery...and if I were a tree I would want to be a willow...being short in stature I have always wanted to be graceful and willowy...lol
I love the awaken image
Well written
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Cool imagery...and if I were a tree I would want to be a willow...being short in stature I have always wanted to be graceful and willowy...lol
I love the awaken image
Well written
God bless
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you for taking time to review my 5-7-5 poem. Your comments are appreciated. God bless you too.
Comment from adewpearl
Faye, your poem and artwork complement each other perfectly
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
effective use of personification of the tree as a sleeping green goddess awakened by a strong breeze
beautiful scene with good appeal to the senses
Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Faye, your poem and artwork complement each other perfectly
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
effective use of personification of the tree as a sleeping green goddess awakened by a strong breeze
beautiful scene with good appeal to the senses
Brooke
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke, I hope all is well with you. Thank your for taking the time to review my 5-7-5 poem. Your comments are always "spot on." Take care, Faye :)
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent 5-7-5. The count is there. The message could not be any better. Wish I could get a weeping or pussy willow to grow on my place. Luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Excellent 5-7-5. The count is there. The message could not be any better. Wish I could get a weeping or pussy willow to grow on my place. Luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Comment from dennis0530
Maybe it is fair and reasonable to compare a tree to a goddess. For all the blessings it bestows, the comparison is fitting. Trees provide so many things. From the moment it starts to grow, the wonder already starts.
And then to maturity - all the way providing shade, cool, maybe fruits and home to other creatures.
Joyce Kilmer was so right in his praise for "Trees."
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Maybe it is fair and reasonable to compare a tree to a goddess. For all the blessings it bestows, the comparison is fitting. Trees provide so many things. From the moment it starts to grow, the wonder already starts.
And then to maturity - all the way providing shade, cool, maybe fruits and home to other creatures.
Joyce Kilmer was so right in his praise for "Trees."
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Comment from Acquired Taste
Lovely. A weeping willow certainly deserves the moniker of Green Goddess. The are beautiful trees.
Artwork is very nice and your words are visual. A nice entry for the contest. Best of luck. AT=/
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Lovely. A weeping willow certainly deserves the moniker of Green Goddess. The are beautiful trees.
Artwork is very nice and your words are visual. A nice entry for the contest. Best of luck. AT=/
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Comment from Jean Lutz
Words and picture work in harmony. It doesn't take a lot of wind to start the willow to trembling. Peaceful to look at. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Words and picture work in harmony. It doesn't take a lot of wind to start the willow to trembling. Peaceful to look at. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Comment from Angel Debbie
A green goddess sleeps
until a mighty wind blows
then she awakens
Great descriptive words enhance this write, the poem and picture are great together. Good luck with the 5-7-5 contest this is a great contender!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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A green goddess sleeps
until a mighty wind blows
then she awakens
Great descriptive words enhance this write, the poem and picture are great together. Good luck with the 5-7-5 contest this is a great contender!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Comment from royowen
A really good 5-7-5 entry in this contest! I like this unique short poem, in this limiting poetic form! The dialogue in this this poem is imaginative and clever! The artwork serves to embellish the poem! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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A really good 5-7-5 entry in this contest! I like this unique short poem, in this limiting poetic form! The dialogue in this this poem is imaginative and clever! The artwork serves to embellish the poem! Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
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Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
good visual to portray your message the willow sleeps until the wind awakens her
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
good visual to portray your message the willow sleeps until the wind awakens her
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment on my 5-7-5 poem.
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most welcome..SC >.Faye
