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An Option For Handling Bullies

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Comment from reconciled
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

yes you would've....adrenalin mixed with have too would have and did firm your footing. Once...I was in jr.high...and came walking in the door to find my sister crying on the phone....so from first step in ...I went straight for the phone...and put it to my ear ...to hear a voice I recognized immediately...calling my sister...some things he was gonna wish he didn't...without a word....I turned ran out of the house and around the corner to the Sheraton's address....pounded on the back door...where ...Richard, Martin. and there buddy big Brice...opened without fear for they were three...and...I just started swinging....I guess they were so shocked...they didn't think to respond...?....I don't know...I do know I am grateful...they just took their licking each in turn......ahh they deserved...and never did it again....but I am grateful...I'm pretty sure if they all would have came at me at once.....it might have took a lil' longer...-sniff-...haha...anyway...you absolutely right...it is a coward who only voices thought in crowd...-wink- alright brother...love Michael

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2014

Comment from tbacha58
Excellent
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My dearest, the loveliest analysis of this poem , for me, is, not who you were, it`s who you are NOW, TODAY &TOMORROW, you are a fantastic writer who has an outstanding future, you have thousands here who love you, who are proud of you winning contests, ETC, you have to stop remembering the bad old days, and remember that you never really cared about who used to Bully you, as you made it on your own, the self made writer, who will one day soon, allow those who bullied you, to see what you have become, and I am sure they are the ones hiding still behind the dumpsters.
Love u Terry xoxoxo
My stars from Montreal will lighten up your night in CA. xoxoxo

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2014