Little Poems
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Comment from MagKing
I really do not know how to review this poem.
But I read your notes and your explanation, still it didn't help.
But you did a great job here, I must say.
MagKing
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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I really do not know how to review this poem.
But I read your notes and your explanation, still it didn't help.
But you did a great job here, I must say.
MagKing
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you. It sort of flows in a circle.
Comment from rouskin
Troops destroy Destroy resources Destroy for gain Unfortunately that's the life now Enjoy to destroy...could be the beginning of my first Blitz poem
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Troops destroy Destroy resources Destroy for gain Unfortunately that's the life now Enjoy to destroy...could be the beginning of my first Blitz poem
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thanks rouskin. There you go!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very interesting format, Tom, and one I have never heard of nor seen before now. It is indeed very fast!
I've seen the advertisements for the game on television, and the commercial is hilarious. If the game is half as good as the commercial, I've no doubt that it' a blast to play.
Well done, and thanks for the introduction of yet another form of poetic expression.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Very interesting format, Tom, and one I have never heard of nor seen before now. It is indeed very fast!
I've seen the advertisements for the game on television, and the commercial is hilarious. If the game is half as good as the commercial, I've no doubt that it' a blast to play.
Well done, and thanks for the introduction of yet another form of poetic expression.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dean. It is addictive, I warn you.
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Ha, I can imagine!
You're very welcome, Tom. I may try one of these "Blitz" poems soon.
Comment from WLHall
This is very cool and you did it so well. I am impressed. It indeed hit me like lightning. I have never heard of such a poem. But I'm confused about the rule about line 50 should be the last word of line 47; did you mean 48? Because the last word of 47 is trophies. Am I misunderstanding something? Please clarify because I would like to try one myself. I really enjoyed this and thank you for not only sharing the poem, but the rules also.
WHall
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This is very cool and you did it so well. I am impressed. It indeed hit me like lightning. I have never heard of such a poem. But I'm confused about the rule about line 50 should be the last word of line 47; did you mean 48? Because the last word of 47 is trophies. Am I misunderstanding something? Please clarify because I would like to try one myself. I really enjoyed this and thank you for not only sharing the poem, but the rules also.
WHall
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you WL. You know what? I had pasted the from description a while and forgot about that requirement.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Clash of Clans" is excellent blitz poem that appears to meet its requirements. It moves fast if you do try to puzzle out meanings.
Preston
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"Clash of Clans" is excellent blitz poem that appears to meet its requirements. It moves fast if you do try to puzzle out meanings.
Preston
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you Preston. I do love puzzles.
Comment from NicciFaye
HA!...LOL...Now that is a poem and excellent thoughts...I've played clash of clans...don't necessarily think of it as tooo violent but I can definitely understand the basis of which this poem talks about. Bringing families together, playing board games are more peaceful and spending quality time with one another. Great poem...just great.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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HA!...LOL...Now that is a poem and excellent thoughts...I've played clash of clans...don't necessarily think of it as tooo violent but I can definitely understand the basis of which this poem talks about. Bringing families together, playing board games are more peaceful and spending quality time with one another. Great poem...just great.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you Nicci.
Comment from ravenblack
I think the blitz poem had the same effect on me as playing clash of clans may have on you. The clipped lines work in rapid fire bursts showing really the mechanics of the game and the...thoughts games sometimes inspire. I'm a gamer from way back and know that mushy-headed feeling after stepping away from a long gaming session. Do not get an X-Box One- not if you value sleep.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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I think the blitz poem had the same effect on me as playing clash of clans may have on you. The clipped lines work in rapid fire bursts showing really the mechanics of the game and the...thoughts games sometimes inspire. I'm a gamer from way back and know that mushy-headed feeling after stepping away from a long gaming session. Do not get an X-Box One- not if you value sleep.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you ravenblack. Thanks fir the warning.
Comment from rod007
This kind of poem is effective in evoking images of this video game which is far better than the death and violence of real wars. I've never been a video games guy myself but I know my son loves it. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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This kind of poem is effective in evoking images of this video game which is far better than the death and violence of real wars. I've never been a video games guy myself but I know my son loves it. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you Rod
Comment from tfawcus
An effective blitz. I can just imagine the speed with which your digits are destroying the invaders - such dexterity! These games sure can become addictive!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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An effective blitz. I can just imagine the speed with which your digits are destroying the invaders - such dexterity! These games sure can become addictive!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you tfawcus
Comment from trimple
Hello there Tom
I have never seen this 'Blitz Poem' perfect term given the roots of its origin.
Great read that took us from online gaming to real war, then suggested that all wars be played to settle indifference's. WoW wouldn't that be far more healthy for all concerned. Then again, most wars are about creating money for the weapons industry who have top dog politicians acting as ghosts.
Interesting write Tom
well done
kind regards
trimple:)
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Hello there Tom
I have never seen this 'Blitz Poem' perfect term given the roots of its origin.
Great read that took us from online gaming to real war, then suggested that all wars be played to settle indifference's. WoW wouldn't that be far more healthy for all concerned. Then again, most wars are about creating money for the weapons industry who have top dog politicians acting as ghosts.
Interesting write Tom
well done
kind regards
trimple:)
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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thank you tracey. I like your insight.
