A Copper Coin
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Appearance is key"The beginnings of the Thief Hunter.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think you did a good job with this chapter. I think the extra details help setup the scene and what is happening well. Wonderful descriptions and you did a great job of staying with the character and the viewpoint.
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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I think you did a good job with this chapter. I think the extra details help setup the scene and what is happening well. Wonderful descriptions and you did a great job of staying with the character and the viewpoint.
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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Thank you very much, I love the support that I get on this site which is why I've been continuing with this story a lot more than I have my other ones. (I've been known to hit that wall where the story just doesn't want to go anywhere, but I'm glad that this isn't happening with Skye and her story! :) )
Comment from GracieAnn
Silence, this is a solidly written fiction story with interesting characters and plot lines. The dialogue flows easily and draws the scene well for the reader. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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Silence, this is a solidly written fiction story with interesting characters and plot lines. The dialogue flows easily and draws the scene well for the reader. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-May-2014
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Thank you for your praise, is there anything that I could improve on as I continue with my story? I'm like a sponge, I want to soak up as many tips and helpful hints as I can so I will produce better chapters. I hope you don't mind me asking though...probably should have mentioned that first. - Silence
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Silence, you learner's heart is refreshing. I am a little behind on things, but if you don't mind a poet's view, I can give you that limited perspective. Please hang in there and I hope to attend to your request. :0 GracieAnn