Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debi,
This is a well written rondeau on faith and how to search and find God.
He is all around and we just need to be quiet and pray to find him and hear his call.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan
P S I would like you to know the I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an older poem of your, but a gem nonetheless. Very nicely composed and expressed. First stanza especially. Great job with this spiritual Rondeau. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017

Hi Marilyn,
How sweet of you to go back to this older poem. Three years ago I posted it. I haven't read it myself in a long time. Thank you for the review and reminding me of this project I have set the side for a while.
Debi

Comment from raineywriter

Excellent

Well done. I find myself resisting challenges to write poems in a specific form, but I admire those who embrace the challenge. This is a lovely poem that will be deeply appreciated by all who believe. You've met the challenge successfully, while managing not to cloud the message, and also managing to create beautiful music with the words - which for me is the measure of good poetry. Very well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for going back into my portfolio to find this one. I haven't looked at it in a while. I did make a goal the last two years to explore new forms. When I joined FS two years ago all I knew was there were sonnets, free verse and quatrains. Who knew there are more forms than I'll every have time to find. Even sonnets themselves come in numerous forms. I have found this a great place of discovery and growth. I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem and its message. Thank you for the generous comments about the writing.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

This is truly lovely, very uplifting and inspirational - beautiful rhyme, perfect metering and a most wonderful message. I enjoyed it very much! (Gorgeous artwork, too.)

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014

Thank you for the very encouraging review, Dawn. Such gracious remarks are much appreciated. I am so happy to know you found the verse uplifting and inspirational. Thank you!

reply by Dawn Munro on 30-Mar-2014

It was my pleasure.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I love this rondeau, debi. Yours is light as air and inspiring. I love your words of encouragement to find comfort in The Lord. Great rhymes and a terrific repeating phrase. My only nit is the second last line that begins with "gently". The meter didn't work for me in that line. Otherwise, wonderful meter. This poem makes me feel happy and comforted.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Joy,
Thank you so much for the great review. Yeah, I know, I took advantage of th fact iambic meter is not required in the rondeau. I wanted a pause in that spot, which does upset the meter a bit. Thank you for noticing and commenting. You are the only one that has. Maybe I'll work on I a bit more. I am so happy it made you feel happy and comforted.

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

This is beautiful, creative, & expresses my feelings exactly. I'm not into large displays of thunder, when it comes to faith. I see it as a quiet personal relationship that's tended thru-out each day -- a 2-way street where we need to be quiet & listen at least as much as we pray & request. Your poem speaks of this exact process, for me. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Hi Barleygirl,
I totally agree that faith is a quiet personal relationship. You state so well what I was trying to get across. Thank you for sharing your insights. You make my day with your wonderful comments. Thank you!

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

"The Lord Is" reads well. The rhyme and rhythm combine to give the poem a satisfying feel. The line "You contemplate your soul's desire" invites the reader to slow down, be still and focus on the voice of your soul. Let it talk to you.

Thank you for sharing your first Rondeau.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Hi Pegcook,
Nice to meet you. I appreciate the kind analysis. Thank you for pointing out how that one line affects the poem. I appreciate the encouragement.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I loved your first attempt at the rondeau form. Certainly a good subject to begin with. The composition is very good in my opinion although I certainly am no expert. I hope you get positive reviews. Don

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Hi Don,
I appreciate the encouraging remarks. I appreciate the good wishes and am so happy you enjoyed the poem. Debi

Comment from Cherokee messenger

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with it's inspiring message. It flows very well. It also fits the rondeau format, which is a difficult one to pull off successfully. Good job!
Best Wishes,
Valerie

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Hi Valerie,

Thank you for the very encouraging remarks. It was a bit of a challenge, but I wanted to try something new. I am so happy you liked it and found it inspirational.
Thank you, Debi

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

wj, this Rondeau is well done and hard to believe that it is your first! The rhyme is engaging. It depicts well two of the many facets of God in His might and His tenderness. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Hi GracieAnn,
You are too kind! Thank you for the generous comments and for sharing your insights on the subject. I appreciate the encouragement.