Comment from marycec

Excellent

Wow! What a great form three poems for the price of one. I like that very much and your photography complements it beautifully.the rhyme pattern adds to the overall unity of the poem.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014

Thank you Mary. It if a fun format.

Comment from MoIronE13

Excellent

Very cool style this Trigee.
I must give it a try sometime.
I love the photos and the poem fits it perfectly.
great imagery and natures beauty.
Thanks for sharing my friend.
Appreciated.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014

Thank you MolronE for your appreciation and insight.

reply by MoIronE13 on 21-Mar-2014

pleasure indeed..

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Super photos.
I like the form.
Creative and original with geat flow and feeling.
Reads well and make sense.
Must read!!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2014

Thank you poet bear.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
"Contrasts" is an excellent poem meeting all of the requirements of the Trigee form as specified by the author. It has good rhyme, flow, and figurative language and imagery (that lingers without regrets.
Preston

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thanks again Preston.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

I love these. I've seen someone else write one of these before. Its almost similar to the 2-n-1 poems. A great piece as you get so much in one. I hope all has been well Treischel!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thank you Nicvi. Yes, all going well. Good to hear from you.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You wrote this one so well, it was a treat to have the three in one style. I have seen it on here only a few times and tried to do it once. Failed totally. You have mastered it well, you can pat yourself on the back, Tom. I also liked the subject, you brought it all together nicely. I loved your photos! :) xsx sandra

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thank you Sandra. Ok, I'm patting. ;-)

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Another lovely style which you have highlighted well
I like the fact that you have three images and three poems in one-clever choice and overall presentation.
The style certainly poses a challenge.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thank you Shirley. Yes, I thought the three images appropriate. The bottom one could be either a sunrise or sunset.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Interesting poem and, as usual, splendid photographs. This form must take a bit of mental juggling I imagine. Yours holds together well as three separate poems. The idea of sunrise and sunset lends itself well to this kind of treatment. I imagine that you could also use it to develop two sides of an argument. Must give it a go sometime!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you tfawcus, yes and opposing concepts will work.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

A very beautiful type of poem. The contrasts are amazing and it catches the eyes as you look to the east and west. It takes a little imagination to see the third poem, but I finally saw it. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you rod. It takes some imagination and two things you can blend. Up/down, in/out / son/moon, here/there. Those sort of things.

Comment from L.M.Mullins

Excellent

I have never heard a Trigee, but you have my attention and I am intrigued with it and it appears to be quite the challenge. Thank you for the post

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you. L M. By all means try one.