The Age of Heroes
Heroic Contest Winner!19 total reviews
Comment from Sylvia Page
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A very refreshing story a grandfather to his grandson on heroes. Well done
Best wishes
Sylvia
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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computer[remove ,] that
pushed Michael out [of] the way.
A very refreshing story a grandfather to his grandson on heroes. Well done
Best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Sylvia.
Comment from kiwijenny
Yay for Gramps and Jason ...an era a new dawn is about to happen...a new superhero is born ...or if not born bequeathed with a cape of his own...with wonder in their eyes little children will talk of the mighty new hero....a super hero for the times of terror.....take that bam pow kazam....you pesky varmints, you criminals
God bless...loved it.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Yay for Gramps and Jason ...an era a new dawn is about to happen...a new superhero is born ...or if not born bequeathed with a cape of his own...with wonder in their eyes little children will talk of the mighty new hero....a super hero for the times of terror.....take that bam pow kazam....you pesky varmints, you criminals
God bless...loved it.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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LOL. Thank you very much.
Comment from Nosha17
I liked your heart warming story very much, it had a super message for people to learn from. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions. It flowed along well from start to finish. Your characters came alive and it was a most enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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I liked your heart warming story very much, it had a super message for people to learn from. You have made good use of language in your narrative and descriptions. It flowed along well from start to finish. Your characters came alive and it was a most enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from barleygirl
I enjoyed your nostalgic tale that teaches of heroes & villians, hero worship vs hero inspiration. The writing is nearly perfect, not a bump or SPAG that I noticed. Nice use of realistic dialogue and interesting ending. Thanks for sharing this uplifting story.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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I enjoyed your nostalgic tale that teaches of heroes & villians, hero worship vs hero inspiration. The writing is nearly perfect, not a bump or SPAG that I noticed. Nice use of realistic dialogue and interesting ending. Thanks for sharing this uplifting story.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from adewpearl
almost close to tears, and sometimes - add comma
voice got real low, and I found - drop the "and"
how it would end," - make that a period
How did it end, gramps - Gramps
It was us; the everyday people - make that a comma
a part time mail carrier, was crossing - add the comma
Mr. Pavlock, broke his leg - drop the comma
He gave me a led chest - lead
so long as brave men with small boy - boys
a wonderfully inspiring story with an upbeat message
Excellent dialogue and character development
Just watch the SPAG issues
Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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almost close to tears, and sometimes - add comma
voice got real low, and I found - drop the "and"
how it would end," - make that a period
How did it end, gramps - Gramps
It was us; the everyday people - make that a comma
a part time mail carrier, was crossing - add the comma
Mr. Pavlock, broke his leg - drop the comma
He gave me a led chest - lead
so long as brave men with small boy - boys
a wonderfully inspiring story with an upbeat message
Excellent dialogue and character development
Just watch the SPAG issues
Brooke
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Brooke. I appreciate all the help.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the boy who became a hero with his grandfather's legacy and brought heroes back to this world. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the boy who became a hero with his grandfather's legacy and brought heroes back to this world. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate the great review.
Comment from buzclick
LOL, You had me to the very end. hahahahaha
Good luck on your contest.
Very imaginative and well penned story.
I truly enjoyed reading this.
Bravo!
"In brightest day, in blackest night, No evil shall escape my sight. Let those who worship evil's might..."
The ring always finds its owner.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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LOL, You had me to the very end. hahahahaha
Good luck on your contest.
Very imaginative and well penned story.
I truly enjoyed reading this.
Bravo!
"In brightest day, in blackest night, No evil shall escape my sight. Let those who worship evil's might..."
The ring always finds its owner.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it, and I knew true fans would recognize the oath.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good introduction that describes the emotion of the grandfather and the grandson. Good dialogue between the two as well. Good story telling by grandpa and good question asking by grandson. The letter deepens the emotion as this piece comes to a tear filled ending. Good work.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Good introduction that describes the emotion of the grandfather and the grandson. Good dialogue between the two as well. Good story telling by grandpa and good question asking by grandson. The letter deepens the emotion as this piece comes to a tear filled ending. Good work.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from syamilsapari
Really good story.
Loved the storyline. I thought your attempt in taking a different approach to the prompt was a good move.
In other words, keep writing! :-)
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Really good story.
Loved the storyline. I thought your attempt in taking a different approach to the prompt was a good move.
In other words, keep writing! :-)
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
