Lunar Legacy
Cursed celestial satellite-why do you torment me so?76 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Left howling at the moon so to speak.
For once I was not struck by the horror of the tale but rather the wisdom of the message within.
Be careful what you wish for, for it just may come true -especially if you trust a stranger.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Left howling at the moon so to speak.
For once I was not struck by the horror of the tale but rather the wisdom of the message within.
Be careful what you wish for, for it just may come true -especially if you trust a stranger.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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So very true, seken58. Thank you very much for your very thoughtful review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, dean, i was able to see this one, lol. great imagery presented here and the pain he felt as he hit the ground was realistic. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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this is very well written, dean, i was able to see this one, lol. great imagery presented here and the pain he felt as he hit the ground was realistic. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks, sweet. I'm very glad that you liked this. I sincerely appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Leineco
What brought this fate upon him,
This moon lust transformation?
Ah - but does it really matter
the source or incantation?
What matters is, his soul is lost
to lupine inclinations -
humanity slowly draining
per gypsy's prognostication.
With a whimper transforming to growling,
neath the silvery glow of the moon
Aflame with the itch of conversion
last sound - a Romanian tune. . . . . .
Captivating write :-)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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What brought this fate upon him,
This moon lust transformation?
Ah - but does it really matter
the source or incantation?
What matters is, his soul is lost
to lupine inclinations -
humanity slowly draining
per gypsy's prognostication.
With a whimper transforming to growling,
neath the silvery glow of the moon
Aflame with the itch of conversion
last sound - a Romanian tune. . . . . .
Captivating write :-)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Leineco, for a captivating reply as well.
Comment from manicblue
Very well written -- and sooo scary! Mixing the mystery of gypsy's and the elusive werewolf had a profound effect on this reader. ;P
The dialogue between beast and gypsy was intriguing - both mysterious.
I only saw this: whisperd, soft and low-- (whispered)
mb xx
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Very well written -- and sooo scary! Mixing the mystery of gypsy's and the elusive werewolf had a profound effect on this reader. ;P
The dialogue between beast and gypsy was intriguing - both mysterious.
I only saw this: whisperd, soft and low-- (whispered)
mb xx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks,manicblue. I appreciate you pointing that out, and it has been addressed. Much obliged!
Comment from w.j.debi
Dark and enchanting look at the cursed werewolf legend. Excellent rhythm that carries this tale forward with such a mysterious air. The rhyme scheme is well done. But best of all, the story is captivating. You weave in the gypsy queen, the curse and the brooding musical strains masterfully to give a foreboding and hopeless feeling to the tale. The artwork caps it off. Very well crafted.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Dark and enchanting look at the cursed werewolf legend. Excellent rhythm that carries this tale forward with such a mysterious air. The rhyme scheme is well done. But best of all, the story is captivating. You weave in the gypsy queen, the curse and the brooding musical strains masterfully to give a foreboding and hopeless feeling to the tale. The artwork caps it off. Very well crafted.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks for an awesome, most generous review, Debi. I'm deeply honored.
Comment from Twilightspire
Wow. This was an amazing poem. More story than poetry in my mind, but hey. The words you chose all added up to tell a time honored tale, the curse of the werewolf. I love the descriptions you used throughout the piece, small but powerful. Truly amazing job on this. You must be reading my mind, I've.been thinking of found a wolf story for the sentence starts the story contest. Lol. Great work.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Wow. This was an amazing poem. More story than poetry in my mind, but hey. The words you chose all added up to tell a time honored tale, the curse of the werewolf. I love the descriptions you used throughout the piece, small but powerful. Truly amazing job on this. You must be reading my mind, I've.been thinking of found a wolf story for the sentence starts the story contest. Lol. Great work.
-T.J.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks, T.J. I'm really glad you got to take a peek at this one for me. Thanks for the fantastic and positive review!
Comment from GE Parson
The entire world's population is crazy ecept for you an d me, but I'm beginnings to have serious doubt a bout you.
Where do you find these "historical" accounts of blood, guts and gore? (Don't answer that)
Thank you for insruction on posting music.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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The entire world's population is crazy ecept for you an d me, but I'm beginnings to have serious doubt a bout you.
Where do you find these "historical" accounts of blood, guts and gore? (Don't answer that)
Thank you for insruction on posting music.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hah, yeah, I wonder about myself sometimes, Jerry. You're not alone in that respect. Thanks for such a fantastic and entertaining review. Much appreciated!
Comment from GregoryCody
I'm glad you had notes, I was literally just going to ask you about cimbalon. This flows so well. I love your use of apostrophes. Makes the poetry speak to the reader. Really adds zing, flavor. This is interesting too! Eerie and entertaining! Its good to read your work again, I've been gone a while.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I'm glad you had notes, I was literally just going to ask you about cimbalon. This flows so well. I love your use of apostrophes. Makes the poetry speak to the reader. Really adds zing, flavor. This is interesting too! Eerie and entertaining! Its good to read your work again, I've been gone a while.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks for taking a look at it for me, Gregory. I've always valued your opinions very highly.
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Yours too Dean yours too
Comment from DALLAS01
Your poem builds fear from the bottom up. The hi-lighted verses, placing the emphasis on the moon are very effective. The poems mystery lies not only in the story itself, but also in the language of another century taut with mystery and superstition. The author notes are an added treat.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Your poem builds fear from the bottom up. The hi-lighted verses, placing the emphasis on the moon are very effective. The poems mystery lies not only in the story itself, but also in the language of another century taut with mystery and superstition. The author notes are an added treat.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks very much, DALLAS. I am really glad that you liked it!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Dean,
you show your poetic talent of rhyming and story telling us all at once.
Your use of words such as - woebegone monster gave me the feeling of remorse for the man pegging not to be a beast when the moon is full.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi Dean,
you show your poetic talent of rhyming and story telling us all at once.
Your use of words such as - woebegone monster gave me the feeling of remorse for the man pegging not to be a beast when the moon is full.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much as always, Gert. I truly appreciate your awesome review!
