Lunar Legacy
Cursed celestial satellite-why do you torment me so?76 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
Nice!You make me remember the old movies, An Excellent slice of poetic darkness Dean, they don't seem to make any kick-ass werewolf movies anymore which is a shame, I remember the old classics, An American werewolf in London(my favorite), the first Howling(a very close second) and Silver bullet, even Jack Nicholson's Wolf was cool in its own unique way. Always nice to read you mate...
I hope to be back on site soon, it has been way too long, but life(work)is crazy busy at the moment
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Nice!You make me remember the old movies, An Excellent slice of poetic darkness Dean, they don't seem to make any kick-ass werewolf movies anymore which is a shame, I remember the old classics, An American werewolf in London(my favorite), the first Howling(a very close second) and Silver bullet, even Jack Nicholson's Wolf was cool in its own unique way. Always nice to read you mate...
I hope to be back on site soon, it has been way too long, but life(work)is crazy busy at the moment
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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An American Werewolf in London, directed by John Landis. That is my all time favorite wolfman movie as well, Hitch. The way humor was intertwined with the horror is what made that movie tick for me. That, and the most awesome transformation scene I've ever seen, before or now.
I really appreciate you popping in to have a look at this one, and I really appreciate the kind comments and review!
Comment from ragamuffin
Very eerie and unnerving poem, captivating actually, as well as quite interesting author's notes. So much more to us, our psyches, than meets the eye. Your piece created quite the picture for the reader to see as well as conveyed a feel of an earnest desire to rid one's self of a curse, sympathy from an old woman who could not magically make the bad go away, and fear of the unknown and the numerous demons that exist without and within.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Very eerie and unnerving poem, captivating actually, as well as quite interesting author's notes. So much more to us, our psyches, than meets the eye. Your piece created quite the picture for the reader to see as well as conveyed a feel of an earnest desire to rid one's self of a curse, sympathy from an old woman who could not magically make the bad go away, and fear of the unknown and the numerous demons that exist without and within.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you, ragamuffin. I am really glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Mastery
Hi, my friend. I am appreciative of your notes..very interesting. Freud kicked the bucket the year I was born. Perhaps there was something behind that concerning me. LOL. What a genius you are, Dean:
"Lunar legacy darkens deep - your soul,
beware moonbeams luster, luminous glow!
Wolf's bloody malevolence will be sought,
undoing the good in the life you wrought."
Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi, my friend. I am appreciative of your notes..very interesting. Freud kicked the bucket the year I was born. Perhaps there was something behind that concerning me. LOL. What a genius you are, Dean:
"Lunar legacy darkens deep - your soul,
beware moonbeams luster, luminous glow!
Wolf's bloody malevolence will be sought,
undoing the good in the life you wrought."
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Ha, ha! Thanks so much, Bob. You, sir, have made my day!
I truly appreciate the awesome review, my friend.
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I am b usy seeking a publisher for my book and outlining a new Cleve adventure. Take care, my friend. Bob
Comment from rtobaygo
Absolutely brilliant! Each stanza a poem itself. The imagery, rhyme and flow are superb. The reader is allowed to feel the torment of the 'cursed one'.
Kudos!
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Absolutely brilliant! Each stanza a poem itself. The imagery, rhyme and flow are superb. The reader is allowed to feel the torment of the 'cursed one'.
Kudos!
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you for such an enthusiastic response, Ray. It's reviews like yours that make me try and do even better the next time out.
Much obliged.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another dark and sinister poem from the author in this piece of writing. There are some striking images conjures up in the mind if the reader by both the words and the images. The moon has sparked the imagination if human beings since the dawn of time and it will continue to do so for the foreseeable future.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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This is yet another dark and sinister poem from the author in this piece of writing. There are some striking images conjures up in the mind if the reader by both the words and the images. The moon has sparked the imagination if human beings since the dawn of time and it will continue to do so for the foreseeable future.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Tomes.
Comment from The Death
Hi, Dean.
What a haunting atmosphere you create here!!
Excellent word choices add to the drama of your write.
Stunning presentation for your work.
The use of rhyming makes it fluid.
It is rich in phonetics with abundance of consonances and mixed assonance.
Your notes are informative as well.
I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi, Dean.
What a haunting atmosphere you create here!!
Excellent word choices add to the drama of your write.
Stunning presentation for your work.
The use of rhyming makes it fluid.
It is rich in phonetics with abundance of consonances and mixed assonance.
Your notes are informative as well.
I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Anupam. I'm very grateful for your thoughtful comments.
Comment from amahra
Wooooo and I just had to read this at night 1"45 am. Thank you for not posting a video with this. I don't think my heart could have taken it. This was really scary and wonderful at the same time. And the art work. Well that's the darkness of you. LOL Just kidding.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Wooooo and I just had to read this at night 1"45 am. Thank you for not posting a video with this. I don't think my heart could have taken it. This was really scary and wonderful at the same time. And the art work. Well that's the darkness of you. LOL Just kidding.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hah, thanks, amahra. Yep, no soundtrack with this one. The only time you need worry about music or sound is with a PictaPoem, and I will always include that name in the title--just so people will know.
Comment from victor 66
You know Dean, your stuff is so good and the presentation so great, it astounds me. As a child, and even now many years later, I still enjoy a good horror story. I remember staying up late and catching Lon Chaney Jr. with the rest of the gang. It was the best! Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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You know Dean, your stuff is so good and the presentation so great, it astounds me. As a child, and even now many years later, I still enjoy a good horror story. I remember staying up late and catching Lon Chaney Jr. with the rest of the gang. It was the best! Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you, victor. I used to do the same things, frequently sneaking out of my bed after mom & dad had gone to bed, to catch the Creature Features, which my parents forbade, of course.
I appreciate the review, my friend.
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Life was and is, pretty good. Once in a while I will watch those old movies because there is still some magic there. Take care.
Comment from NicciFaye
Dean..it really amazes me how you come up with these poems of terror, scare, and horror. You're in a class by yourself. I haven't ran into anyone who can do what you do as far as genre in story and poetry. Excellent.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Dean..it really amazes me how you come up with these poems of terror, scare, and horror. You're in a class by yourself. I haven't ran into anyone who can do what you do as far as genre in story and poetry. Excellent.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Nicci, that's quite a compliment. Now you've got me blushing! (LOL)
I really appreciate it, my friend.
Comment from angelface2
Another night of pleasant screams! Not if I can help it! I thought I was reading a science fiction novel, or almost watching a movie, as the imagery was so prevalent. I would never like to see a werewolf! good job. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Another night of pleasant screams! Not if I can help it! I thought I was reading a science fiction novel, or almost watching a movie, as the imagery was so prevalent. I would never like to see a werewolf! good job. Miss Sally
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Miss Sally, nor would I. I appreciate the kind comments.
