Comment from Nichola

Excellent

Very nice assonance with the short -I- sound in chilly-windy-city-Chicago. Good imagery. A great little 3-5-3 poem.

Nichola

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thank you, I believe that was for a contest, it's been awhile...I appreciate your comments very much.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. Chicago is noted for it's winds. The winds can bring a real chill in the winter time Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

thank you very much!!

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nice! If you read the first word of your three lines straight down--it reads "Chilly, windy Chicago." Something about the name Chicago that grips us all.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thank you...being cold was my first thought for this contest entry, lol...have a great weekend

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Chilly day Windy city air Chicago One of my favorite songs,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=of6JVn8i934 Back to Chicago Styx - Edge Of The Century Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thank your for your kind review and the song...love Styx!!

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I think you rose to this contest beautifully the whole presentation art/color and words is absolutely top drawer.

It was a pleasure to read you this evening - Dinah

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for reading and the wonderful review...

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This sounds like today's news on Chicago, except I think it's quite a bit more than chilly! Form and syllable count are correct according to contest criteria. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you so much!!

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This three-line, 3-5-3 syllable count poem on wind fulfills the elements of the contest in a knowing way since Chicago is King of the windy city. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you for your wonderful, kind words and review!!