Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 156 "The Water Maid"Small and Specialty Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful thought
Beautiful image
Beautiful picture...
Water maid .....beautiful..........I like to think she was real and when I was eight she definitely was real
God bless
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Beautiful thought
Beautiful image
Beautiful picture...
Water maid .....beautiful..........I like to think she was real and when I was eight she definitely was real
God bless
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you Kiwijenney. Oh to be young again!
Comment from Angel Debbie
Nice garden write. Beautiful image of the Garden in the park.
Words seldom describe a water fountain as you have shown here but your message is loud and clear. Nice write and no she wasn't real.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Nice garden write. Beautiful image of the Garden in the park.
Words seldom describe a water fountain as you have shown here but your message is loud and clear. Nice write and no she wasn't real.
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you Angel. A very nice review.
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You're so welcome
Comment from akulkumol
Beauty speaks itself it becomes more beautiful in the writings of a poet. The stunning picture is really a made for each other pair. Really loved and enjoyed the poem along with the picture.Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Beauty speaks itself it becomes more beautiful in the writings of a poet. The stunning picture is really a made for each other pair. Really loved and enjoyed the poem along with the picture.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you akulkumol. I enjoyed you comments.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Maybe she resembles the love interest or muse of a clever artist or the very real figment of his imagination.
Regardless of the reason for her existence she now takes pride of place and is admired and viewed by many.
This clever dizain poem glorifies and justifies her placement there.
Well written, rhymes and presented.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Maybe she resembles the love interest or muse of a clever artist or the very real figment of his imagination.
Regardless of the reason for her existence she now takes pride of place and is admired and viewed by many.
This clever dizain poem glorifies and justifies her placement there.
Well written, rhymes and presented.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Love these fountain nymphs.
Comment from MagKing
The writing was truly and indeed impeccable!
Yet you still remind me of the use of flowers and writing about them.
Thanks for sharing!
I have reviewed nine of your work
Now, please make it a two-way street
Ecclesiastes, If Only, A Look At The Corridors of Life, My heart within Your Heaven, these are the titles of my work I promoted, just four of them.
Please review before tomorrow, I suppose their certificate will expire before tomorrow.
MagKing
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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The writing was truly and indeed impeccable!
Yet you still remind me of the use of flowers and writing about them.
Thanks for sharing!
I have reviewed nine of your work
Now, please make it a two-way street
Ecclesiastes, If Only, A Look At The Corridors of Life, My heart within Your Heaven, these are the titles of my work I promoted, just four of them.
Please review before tomorrow, I suppose their certificate will expire before tomorrow.
MagKing
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you . I appreciate you time and comments . Be happy to review yours.
Comment from Chap Man
Fine poem and pic, and your notes were very helpful. Sam for peeking! Usually I find one place to complain but failed this time. Super! Chap Man
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Fine poem and pic, and your notes were very helpful. Sam for peeking! Usually I find one place to complain but failed this time. Super! Chap Man
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much Sam for the comments and rating.
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Darn,that was Chap Man and my typo went through. Was to supposed "Shame for peeking!"
Comment from evilynne
A beautiful expressive poem. I can just imagine the garden and the water nymph. As far as I can tell, the poetic form is correct.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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A beautiful expressive poem. I can just imagine the garden and the water nymph. As far as I can tell, the poetic form is correct.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the visit and comments, evilness.
Comment from Gungalo
The setting was a luscious blend
Of color that bloomed end-to-end.
Enclosed in weathered cobble stone,
An artist's dream to comprehend.
Amazing she was here alone!
Just beautiful Tom. Your water maid is in her glory. Great Dizain. You made a great choice in presentation of it.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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The setting was a luscious blend
Of color that bloomed end-to-end.
Enclosed in weathered cobble stone,
An artist's dream to comprehend.
Amazing she was here alone!
Just beautiful Tom. Your water maid is in her glory. Great Dizain. You made a great choice in presentation of it.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you Gungalo. I appreciate this wonderful review.
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Smile Tom.
Comment from rod007
Through your perception and talent with words, you brought this water maiden to life. She is no longer a statue and these words reflect the spirit you injected in her:
"She's unadorned in flowered glade,
Toe testing water sheepishly."
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Through your perception and talent with words, you brought this water maiden to life. She is no longer a statue and these words reflect the spirit you injected in her:
"She's unadorned in flowered glade,
Toe testing water sheepishly."
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you rod.
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your choice of the two five-line stanzas for the Dizain, along with the eight-syllable lines. I appreciated your rhymes and your identifying the location splendid photograph. You captured the "spirit" of the statue and the solitude of the place. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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I liked your choice of the two five-line stanzas for the Dizain, along with the eight-syllable lines. I appreciated your rhymes and your identifying the location splendid photograph. You captured the "spirit" of the statue and the solitude of the place. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Thank you Joan. One of my favorite spots. I warm on a winters day.
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Thanks for the tip on staying warm on a winter's day--enjoy a special scene! I hope this weekend supplies several- Joan
