Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a neat idea--to review a favorite movie in a series of 5-7-5's and add rhyme! I liked the way you wove in the names and actions of the main characters. Your suite brought back fond memories of the film. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Thank you Joan. You must be an SW fan.

reply by Joan E. on 20-Feb-2014

I was when our son was growing up--I remember making an Star Wars costume for him...thanks for bringing back fond memories. -J

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

And how fun it was to read!

Love the consistent, clever mono-rhyme.

You've done it again, my friend. :)

It WAS a long time ago!

Sonali

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Sonali. Yes, in a Galaxy far away .....

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A very interesting and informative review.
Even though I'm not a fan of Star WArs I found the review quite detailed and precise.
The 5/7/5 Review Suite format is used quite effectively.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Shirley. My wife isn't crazy about scifi movies either.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Star Wars was a box office smash. They brought it back a few times and there are all those videos and merchandise. This is a great poetic tribute. Good visual imagery. Good rhymes. Fantastic work.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Alicia.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
"Star Wars" is an accurate movie review and a lot of fun. It has good rhyme for the most part and it flows well except in those sentences beginning with stressed syllables.Since there is a caveat that 5-7-5 poetry does not have to flow, I will change my review rating to excellent. I do wonder if good flow becomes more needed in a suite of 5-7-5 poems than in stand alone.
You friend
Preston

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thanks Preston. 5-7-5 don't need to flow, or even rhyme.

reply by Preston McWhorter on 19-Feb-2014

O.K. I will change the rating.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Oh my
What a fabulous story poem of the star wars movies, really well done Tom. I watched them all with gusto.
Thanks for reminding me of this iconic movie.

kind regards
tracey

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thank you Tracey.

Comment from queenv

Excellent

You did an excellent job. I used to be totally fascinated with this movie and the follow up series. You painted a great picture through your words. Great job!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thank you queenv