Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

You have combined a perfect blend between the image and poetry style.
A perfect match yet again.
The word imagery and description you have used complement your carefully chosen image.
The Tetracyts style has been used to full advantage and coupled with a lovely overall presentation.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you Shirley, for a wonderful review.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Wonderful poem. Great poetic form as you mastered the flow of rhythm and rhymes. It is lyrical. WEll thought out and clearly written. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thank you Sunni. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

A very serene and meaningful poem. I liked these words,
"Flow
Freely
Waterfall
Such sweet music"
It gave me the sense of magic. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thank you so much rod. I know what you mean

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

A very lovely poem, Tom. Beautiful to look at and beautiful to read. I so enjoy a waterfall. You've captured its personality perfectly. Great photo. Well done!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thank you Marietta. I really like waterfalls.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Great Treischel,
This was clean, green and healthy.
A beautiful image and a nice write.
Almost a little breath of fresh air.

Your usual pillar of strength with the structure.
Good write.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

Thank you RGstar.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

I would like a fountain in my back yard--some day;
Your well-penned double tetractys brings to mind the soothing melody of flowing waters;
Nice alliteration;
Flowing water adds an addition to any garden--the gentle sounds in lieu of brilliant floral colors.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

Thank you Margaret.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
"Flow Free" is excellent poetry. You again prove yourself the master of the obscure form by writing this double Tetractys poetry in the required format and syllable count. The structure is visually appealing and the alliteration and the rhyme are excellent. (cascading crescendo)
Preston

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

Thank you Preston.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

An enchanting picture and poem written as a double Tetracty
with 20 syllables in each stanza and telling a complete story of the serenity and freedom enjoyed at the lake

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

Thank you emrpoems.