Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Yesterday my world was melancholic
Then something happened
My mood changed
My head is happy
I am free again
The happiness will stay with me
I'm floating in the wind
I am free again
Past, past

Wonderful girl and just in time for Christmas too. Have a Merry one.
Everything is good

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine

reply by Gungalo on 24-Dec-2013

The same to you Ine.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Well, Ine, I do hope the happiness stays a long while. Moods and emotions change constantly - I know they do with me:)

~Teresa~

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Mood changes to the good is always a wonderful thing. It beats depression any day. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 23-Dec-2013

You're welcome, Likewise to you, Ine. Charlie

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Glad you are feeling happy again. You didn't explain the reason for your feelings. Hope it has to do with your treatment. Or did you just have a wonderful anniversary? Anyway, you really expressed your feeling, and you made us happy. Have a wonderful Christmas. judi

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

Yes, this was a very happy poem/song lyric. When things change in our favor a new song comes forth. I am happy for you. I can feel the joy throughout this poem. Well written.

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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine

Comment from queenv

Excellent

I am so glad you find happiness in the midst of illness. I like the flow of the poem. I like the colorful illustrations . Good job!

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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week and happy holidays, Ine