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senryu (headache)

senryu

22 total reviews 
Comment from me_tudor
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I love the picture with this poem. It really demonstrates a headache. I've had several that felt like that was exactly what was happening to my head. Great combination.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
    I used to get horrible migraines. Not so much anymore. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from JM daSilva
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Be careful they won't start kidnapping doctors. But because of the placebo effect many people get better just by going to the doctor.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
    Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
    Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from ChowChow
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Liked you poem. But now I must ask you a question... Do you have two Doctors I can take? I don't have any aspirin, took the last two earlier in the day. chowchow

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
    Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
    Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Mastery
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Two doctors? LOL.. Very good, Debbie. Should we call the Aspirin in the morning? I had never heard this before but I sure think it's clever. Thanks for sharing...Merry Christmas, Debbie. X0 Bob

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    Thanks, Bob. Glad you enjoyed this. I was in a goofy mood one afternoon and wrote a page full of these.

    But really, I would trust the aspirin much more than my doctor who is uncaring and incompetent!!!

    Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by Mastery on 12-Dec-2013
    OMG Get rid of that doctor, Debbie. LOL
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Debbie,
loved your play on thoughts... loved the visual, it set this Senryu up perfectly... but I think you may need to be on a course of doctors, just to make sure... clever!

Be well and take care, don't forget to give my favorite Beagle a lick from me.

With our thoughts we create,
kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    Thanks, my dear friend and I will certainly tell Zoey it is from you. I am so far behind, my replies will be short for a couple days so I can get caught up. Take care, James~Debbie xx
Comment from Narvik
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Yes, it struck me as very funny. But it also reminded me about medical overkill in America. If you have a minor ailment, there are plenty of doctors out there ready to take your money. Anyway, nice little poem that gave me a smile.

~ Marv

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    oh, you are so very right!!! Thanks for reviewing and I am glad you enjoyed this~Debbie
Comment from Domino 2
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LOL, Debbie - this is a fun read.

I would 'take two doctors' and make them diagnose EACH OTHER. Oh, and they'd have to pay the exorbitant bills themselves without the benefit of medical insurance.

That may shock them back to reality. :-)

Cheers, Ted

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    Very funny!!! Thanks for reviewing. Glad you like it~Debbie
Comment from krys123
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I just love it and this was so funny when reading it out loud I just had the biggest laugh of all. I'm having surgery soon on 20 December and I see the doctor before hand, and tell him this one. Thanks for sharing this with everyone including myself. You have a good one of Ms. Lily keep you wise and well.
AK

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    I hope it isn't serious. You will be in my thoughts and prayers~Debbie
reply by krys123 on 13-Dec-2013
    Knowledge is just a total knee surgery with a minor thigh bone transplant
Comment from Deniz22
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Yes, it strikes me funny as well. Maybe it has something to do with two doctors who do not agree on the diagnosis and so give their patient a headache? :) I don't know, it's just funny!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed~DEbbie
Comment from humpwhistle
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Yes, Debbie, it does strike me funny. I can read it
in more ways than one. By imaging different inflections, this can be read as delerious, or frustrated, or even matter-of-fact-sexy. That's a lot for 17 syllables (or less).
Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
    Thank you so very much, Lee. I appreciate your review and comments. Take care, my friend~Debbie