Comment from Nichola

Excellent

Your free verse poem has nice meter and rhyming pattern with same-game and unknown-alone. I like the message of your poem - that it is worth living life true to yourself even if you "go alone."

I think you will find many who empathize with the message of your poem; therefore you are not really alone.

I enjoyed reading this :)

Nichola

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013

Thank you, That means a lot coming from a talented writer such as yourself!! I appreciate the feedback and thank you for introducing me to this site :)

reply by Nichola on 30-Nov-2013

You're welcome. I am glad you like this site. I find it to be very supportive group of writers:)

Comment from Writer1535

Excellent

I really like what this poem says to me. Although the idea isn't exactly...original...the way that you perceive it is absolutely superb! Great job!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it very much...

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Very well written! Short, sweet, and to the point. All things in life are a lesson and we will always come out okay as long as we remember to apply those lessons learned to every present moment. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013

Thank you for your kind words...glad to be part of this group

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

Great work on this poem. I enjoyed reading it. It is very thought provoking and has a very inspirational tone to keep going. I loved All the roads I've traveled
down...not one has been the same:

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem...I enjoy the feedback