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Comment from Gungalo
If you were here beside me,
my heart would soar..
If I could just have one
last moment, I wouldn't ask
for more...
I would make it last a forever,
just to say good-bye...
fill my soul of with all of you,
before off to heaven you'd fly ~
An awesome write Annie and one which we all understand. So nice are your words in this free verse.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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If you were here beside me,
my heart would soar..
If I could just have one
last moment, I wouldn't ask
for more...
I would make it last a forever,
just to say good-bye...
fill my soul of with all of you,
before off to heaven you'd fly ~
An awesome write Annie and one which we all understand. So nice are your words in this free verse.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you Gungalo, I appreciate that very much...
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Petriesan
very touching words. We never know when the last moment will be and too often it is not what we would have hoped it would be.
We should take your words to hear and treat our people with th elove we want to remember every time we are together
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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very touching words. We never know when the last moment will be and too often it is not what we would have hoped it would be.
We should take your words to hear and treat our people with th elove we want to remember every time we are together
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Petriesan, I wrote that when I lost my father-in-law with whom I was very close, Thank you for your kind words.