Comment from Eliza G

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. I liked the picture you created among the trees and your imagery about the cold. Foreshadowing the end when you mention pumpkins brings it all together.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013

Thank you so much Eliza G., Reading your comment gives me the nudge I need to keep on writing. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

AnnieGale, you have not fallen into cliche phrases about Autumn and have given it a fresh approach. I liked the phrase "still hold their own". How very true. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013

Thank you so much GracieAnn, I never before knew I had a writing style but I have seen it myself develop over the years. I appreciate your comment.