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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is simple but lovely. Your form and construction are quite good and convey your message nicely to the reader. This was a most enjoyable read and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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This is simple but lovely. Your form and construction are quite good and convey your message nicely to the reader. This was a most enjoyable read and I thank you very much for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much...I appreciate your feedback and so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Smoothiecool
a very simple poem portraying the feeling of your communication from a distance
your choice of words take your reader on this journey
you have images that makes one see and feel this in your poem
Cheers SC
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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a very simple poem portraying the feeling of your communication from a distance
your choice of words take your reader on this journey
you have images that makes one see and feel this in your poem
Cheers SC
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much, having honest feedback is a good thing...
Comment from brentman99
A nice poem. I know a few people that have met online and I think that they would go in with the same hopes. Hang yourself out there and hope that you find the right someone. I would suggest adding a picture of a keyboard and monitor. Not required, but it would make a nice poem even better. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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A nice poem. I know a few people that have met online and I think that they would go in with the same hopes. Hang yourself out there and hope that you find the right someone. I would suggest adding a picture of a keyboard and monitor. Not required, but it would make a nice poem even better. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you and that is a good suggestion!!
Comment from Paul Sienicki
Yes this might be strange, the two individuals seeking the same goals or desires in life meet and find themselves wondering if they are for each other. I really like your articulation on their theme. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Yes this might be strange, the two individuals seeking the same goals or desires in life meet and find themselves wondering if they are for each other. I really like your articulation on their theme. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you and you're welcome.
Comment from Princesseunice
I really do not agree with online dating but i have heard of those who actually found true love through it.
This poem tells of the worries that come with it, the hopes and aspirations. ..
Well done
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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I really do not agree with online dating but i have heard of those who actually found true love through it.
This poem tells of the worries that come with it, the hopes and aspirations. ..
Well done
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you, this is the first poem I've posted here...I look forward to posting more and reading others.
Comment from NomaFaith
There is a lot of truth to this. Sometimes we just walk past and never realize how alike we are and how much we have in common. I love this
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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There is a lot of truth to this. Sometimes we just walk past and never realize how alike we are and how much we have in common. I love this
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much!!