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Awareness of Self

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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Most people are automatons acting upon thoughts they were convinced to hold as true. << Sad, but definitely correct.

Very interesting article. Only one thing I don't understand... what is this spirit that lives on? When the body dies, doesn't the mind die as well, since its existence is dependent upon the network formed in brain cells and more generally the entire body 'memory' of our lives?

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    Only the ego must go...John
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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I think this is the kind of written that raise the conscious of the readers. Excellent subject an easy to read flowing piece. So enjoyable, that I read it twice.
GREAT job Cogitator!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    Thank you. Much more to come...John
Comment from Ekim777
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It all makes for fascinating reading. In the beginning our intrinsic understanding is instinctual; a pattern that is not awareness. We are at first close to our very essence. Having challenge our erudite writer we must now concentrate on awareness. Our writer is very scientifically minded but let us be simple. We must surely gain a state of choice less awareness of ourselves in our relationships. This is a state beyond the mind and memory which is of the past. We are talking of relating in the eternal present beyond our imaginations. I think your last sentence says it all. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    You have the depth of understanding necessary to create your future. Thanks for the review and the kind rating...John
Comment from Ramona Hughes
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This is an amazing piece of work. The reader is Immediately captivated by the intelligence and truth of your words. Each point is explained and presented in such a way as to teach not to argue.

I have nothing negative to say about this Exceptional piece. I found no grammatical errors,nor any type of confusion in the text. Just wonderful. Well done!

Ramona Hughes

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    Thanks for the uplifting and encouraging words. This will be just one chapter in the eventual book...John
Comment from jmdg1954
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Quite a lengthy posting. There is much to consume. Would it have been better to break this into chapters, like a reference book, making it easier to understand.? Just a thought.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    The book will contain this as one chapter. Thanks for your review...John
Comment from country ranch writer
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you can accomplish so much in life and having the knowledge and know how and the awareness of it all. Life becomes the most important ingredients it is like a recipe

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
    Thanks....John
Comment from Adri7enne
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Good to be there and feeling it. I find it comes and goes. Oh, it leaves a mark at every encounter, but ego is a strong adversary. Living in the moment is a decision that has to be reinforced again and again, until you live there permanently. Hasn't happened for me yet.
I truly enjoyed your essay. Well done!

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
    Thanks. More to come. John...