Little Poems
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18 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
We both play it and enjoy it.
It is a smart and intelligent write.
It is pithy and very direct.
Reads well and makes sense.
Many will relate and enjoy.
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We both play it and enjoy it.
It is a smart and intelligent write.
It is pithy and very direct.
Reads well and makes sense.
Many will relate and enjoy.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from 9999pool
I do believe this is a very neat and fun poem to read and write as well. A scrabble made into a poem with a story to tell. In this case, if not for the game, they may not have told of their love for each other, smiles.
Great work and a neat and fun way to write a poem. Bless Indie and is wondering where she had gone to?
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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I do believe this is a very neat and fun poem to read and write as well. A scrabble made into a poem with a story to tell. In this case, if not for the game, they may not have told of their love for each other, smiles.
Great work and a neat and fun way to write a poem. Bless Indie and is wondering where she had gone to?
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ritchie,
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My pleasure Tom. Ritchie. :))
Comment from CR Delport
You can find love in the most unusual places and circumstances. I suppose even playing a game of scrabble. This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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You can find love in the most unusual places and circumstances. I suppose even playing a game of scrabble. This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks for reading and commenting, CR.
Comment from FrannyG
This is a clever poem both in the writing and in the originality of the idea. You've written it well and managed to sustained some emotional tension while tackling the rhythm and rhyme. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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This is a clever poem both in the writing and in the originality of the idea. You've written it well and managed to sustained some emotional tension while tackling the rhythm and rhyme. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thank you for your astute appraisal.
Comment from linsbm
Well crafted poetry beautifully and lovely rendered. This is an amazing write with brilliant idea of a narrative. Great write. Thanks for sharing.) Lin
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Well crafted poetry beautifully and lovely rendered. This is an amazing write with brilliant idea of a narrative. Great write. Thanks for sharing.) Lin
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you Lin am very pleased with you excellent review and the award of so many stars.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem flows well and tells how love can be started by love of a game or games. My husband and I played a lot of gin and whist before we started dating. Now, on holidays our family plays board and word games like Monopoly, Scattergories and Catch Phrase. Whenever we visited my mother-in-law we played a couple very competitive games of Scrabble.
This followed the format well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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This poem flows well and tells how love can be started by love of a game or games. My husband and I played a lot of gin and whist before we started dating. Now, on holidays our family plays board and word games like Monopoly, Scattergories and Catch Phrase. Whenever we visited my mother-in-law we played a couple very competitive games of Scrabble.
This followed the format well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you dragon poet. Thanks for sharing you impressions.
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You're welcome. It is what we are here for.
dragonpoet
Comment from Ric Myworld
What a fun poem! And goes to show us all that even during a board game that, the magical feeling can come at any time. Thanks for another great poem.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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What a fun poem! And goes to show us all that even during a board game that, the magical feeling can come at any time. Thanks for another great poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ric Myworld.
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice Scrabble poem, written mostly in the quatrain style with an ending couplet, with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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This is a nice Scrabble poem, written mostly in the quatrain style with an ending couplet, with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank youagentagen.
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You're welcome,
Dennis
Comment from Emeka13
It's amazing how great poetry could emerge from a mundane subject if handled by a master crastsman. It's Funny how his profession over shadowed him. Fairer if she managed to find enough tiles to 'play' his name below they got smothered by love. Beautiful without a doubt. Remain blessed. Emeka
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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It's amazing how great poetry could emerge from a mundane subject if handled by a master crastsman. It's Funny how his profession over shadowed him. Fairer if she managed to find enough tiles to 'play' his name below they got smothered by love. Beautiful without a doubt. Remain blessed. Emeka
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you Emka for a wonderful review. Loved your comments and all the stars.
Comment from Millibrad
Nice poem. I like the Scrabble poem idea and your aabb rhyme is great. Of course proper names are not normally allowed, but individual players can modify the rules. "Photographer" could not have happened in one play though because of the seven letter limit plus one connecting letter. I guess poets have license, however. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Nice poem. I like the Scrabble poem idea and your aabb rhyme is great. Of course proper names are not normally allowed, but individual players can modify the rules. "Photographer" could not have happened in one play though because of the seven letter limit plus one connecting letter. I guess poets have license, however. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you Millbrad. I definitely used my license.
