Discover Your Real Status
Who tells your real status? A Non-Fiction in a few words.91 total reviews
Comment from NicciFaye
I not quite sure of this one Alcreator Litt Dear....though I understand some bits of it, am still not certain as to what is it that you're actually attempting to get the reader to understand. I think you might have mixed reviews on this one, as well as its just hard to read with the various spags.
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I not quite sure of this one Alcreator Litt Dear....though I understand some bits of it, am still not certain as to what is it that you're actually attempting to get the reader to understand. I think you might have mixed reviews on this one, as well as its just hard to read with the various spags.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Comment from pickthorn
What a unique idea. Have the wife express her true thoughts about her spouse. His strong points and weak points and areas where he needs to improve. I'm afraid the divorce rate would go up dramatically if this suggestion was adopted universally.
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What a unique idea. Have the wife express her true thoughts about her spouse. His strong points and weak points and areas where he needs to improve. I'm afraid the divorce rate would go up dramatically if this suggestion was adopted universally.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your good comment.
Comment from pbroussard209
I guess I'm just not understanding your message. And at one point is seems your train of thought just stops, (let your non-professional wife tell her views in a word about what you're actually.) you're actually what?
I think your use of the words "non-professional wife" could raise some red flags. Maybe if you explained better your meaning, do your mean a more personal opinion, not a professional opinion that you would get from your co-workers or boss?
Otherwise I think the writing is fine. I give my husband my personal opinion all the time in both his personal and professional life. He may not always like what I have to say, but there it is, whether he wants it or not; honest, harsh, and straight from the heart.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I guess I'm just not understanding your message. And at one point is seems your train of thought just stops, (let your non-professional wife tell her views in a word about what you're actually.) you're actually what?
I think your use of the words "non-professional wife" could raise some red flags. Maybe if you explained better your meaning, do your mean a more personal opinion, not a professional opinion that you would get from your co-workers or boss?
Otherwise I think the writing is fine. I give my husband my personal opinion all the time in both his personal and professional life. He may not always like what I have to say, but there it is, whether he wants it or not; honest, harsh, and straight from the heart.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Comment from mauial
Your sentence structure is strange to say the least. And on top of that this would make more sense if you wrote it to be genderless.
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Your sentence structure is strange to say the least. And on top of that this would make more sense if you wrote it to be genderless.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Comment from dmt1967
Letting someone else tell me who I am I am not sure about that I think I know who I am I am like everybody unique in my own right thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Letting someone else tell me who I am I am not sure about that I think I know who I am I am like everybody unique in my own right thank you for sharing
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from barkingdog
This post is confusing. First, what exactly is a non-professional wife? Homemakers are professional in their ability to run a home and family. Women who work outside the home are professional.
What the is a non-professional wife? Does she do nothing? Does she relax all day with a housekeeper(professional woman or man) to run the home?
You have many spags.
-'Want to know in your hard struggling days(This is an incomplete sentence and makes no sense.)
-What are you(Did you mean 'What you are?' and again it is a phrase that you allow to stand alone without context.)
-what is your status?(See above comment. Incorrect word order.)
-In confidence, (you should) let your non-professional(again what does this mean?) wife tell her views(.) in a word(what can she tell you in only one word?)
-what you're actually(needs proper phrasing: what are you?)
This post continues as badly as above. I've done enough to show you, that you should not ignore rules of grammar. It's not clever. It's annoying.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This post is confusing. First, what exactly is a non-professional wife? Homemakers are professional in their ability to run a home and family. Women who work outside the home are professional.
What the is a non-professional wife? Does she do nothing? Does she relax all day with a housekeeper(professional woman or man) to run the home?
You have many spags.
-'Want to know in your hard struggling days(This is an incomplete sentence and makes no sense.)
-What are you(Did you mean 'What you are?' and again it is a phrase that you allow to stand alone without context.)
-what is your status?(See above comment. Incorrect word order.)
-In confidence, (you should) let your non-professional(again what does this mean?) wife tell her views(.) in a word(what can she tell you in only one word?)
-what you're actually(needs proper phrasing: what are you?)
This post continues as badly as above. I've done enough to show you, that you should not ignore rules of grammar. It's not clever. It's annoying.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thanks.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Nice and short for 1.40. You must reeaallly have wanted to get this message out at that cost! WOW! I get input from my husband, and it is as honest and helpful as it can be, but keep in mind that a loving spouse will usually downplay, if not overlook, many flaws, so their assessment may not be that accurate. Better to find the truth from friends and cousins. They will be more objective.
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Nice and short for 1.40. You must reeaallly have wanted to get this message out at that cost! WOW! I get input from my husband, and it is as honest and helpful as it can be, but keep in mind that a loving spouse will usually downplay, if not overlook, many flaws, so their assessment may not be that accurate. Better to find the truth from friends and cousins. They will be more objective.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from CR Delport
I find a lot of my answers through meditation, and one day I asked my guide why do all the things happen to me that do, and the answer was ... you are exactly where you should be. I think this post says the same. Thanks for sharing.
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I find a lot of my answers through meditation, and one day I asked my guide why do all the things happen to me that do, and the answer was ... you are exactly where you should be. I think this post says the same. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Harv
with true rating about your position and status.
I think this phrase is very telling and thought provoking because what is hidden in public is seen more true by this relationship.
Enthusiastically, discover a real person in you by her frank thoughts, secretly.
this whole ending and sentence is good and i like the part about being honest yet protective is important and solid.
this has a good air and mist about it as its read over and again, im very glad to have had the opportunity to do so
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with true rating about your position and status.
I think this phrase is very telling and thought provoking because what is hidden in public is seen more true by this relationship.
Enthusiastically, discover a real person in you by her frank thoughts, secretly.
this whole ending and sentence is good and i like the part about being honest yet protective is important and solid.
this has a good air and mist about it as its read over and again, im very glad to have had the opportunity to do so
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
Comment from christopherjl
With much concentration I think I caught the gist of what you are saying here. I'm not certain the relevance of a non-professional wife. This writing seems sexist again. Perhaps if I read more of your writing I might better understand your style. I'll have to take a look.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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With much concentration I think I caught the gist of what you are saying here. I'm not certain the relevance of a non-professional wife. This writing seems sexist again. Perhaps if I read more of your writing I might better understand your style. I'll have to take a look.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Sorry for being late.
Thank you.
