Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

Good job on this short write. Sometimes my wife tell me what I am in one word without me asking her. That word can be different depending on the day though. I may ask her this, see what she says.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019

Thank you for this good review and for practice of my implied suggestion.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I liked this piece, Alcreator Litt Dear. It was creative and I had to read it a couple of times before I noticed the acrostic which was hidden. Nice job. Just curiously, are you going to do one about husbands?

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019

Thank you for this good review with a question for my practice.

Comment from WildWithWords

Excellent

The first time I've looked at your prose and I see you are up to your usual tricks. You even brought with you a poetry technique.

Nice little acrostic piece but more than that, a fun piece (as you said) and one which I would agree with you might teach us men a little about how we are seen through the eyes of others.

Bill (WildWithWords)

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019

Thank you for this delightful review.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Al,

This is a terrific write! So much said in so very few words.

Very nicely written. Nothing here that I can see for me to suggest you consider improving upon.

The image you've selected is absolutely perfect to help convey meaning.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you for this great review.

Comment from SLMorrical

Excellent

I like this. I thought the picture was cool for this story. I don't wonder my status and I have a lot of struggling days. This is a wonderful story by a husband and it does come from the heart. This flows well. It is an easy red to follow. Very well done.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you for this simply great, honest and appreciable review.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I would be easy to imagine that my wife knows more about me than anyone else. She is certainly free with her opinion on the subject! Yet there is no one who knows me better than myself.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you for this nice review and sharing your experiences.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I suppose the best thing my wife has said of me that I'm kind. I've always been much more expansive of words about her, because I like to think of myself as liberal with words, but well done, a very thought provoking work here, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you for sharing your experiences and this good review and good wishes.

reply by royowen on 28-Feb-2019

Good job,

Comment from mermaids

Good

I like your prose/poetic form here. Your words are smooth and tell the reader much. It is interesting to think of a wife expressing freely, words about her husband. You give the reader food food for thought.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you.

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hello Al creator litt dear... all I Can say is, Be careful what you wish for!!! LOL Asking someone, even a spouse or a significant other to be free with their thoughts on you can be surprising sometimes... and not necessarily in the best of ways! LOL

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you for this suggestive review.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is an intriguing piece of prose dear alcreator! I can't really know if it would go the other way as for a man to stare the status of a woman as we are the ones who hold the keys to this universe ;)
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thank you.