The Letter From Little Girl
a letter21 total reviews
Comment from Colette
Hi Jim, Hope you don't mind but I have chosen your poems to read this night.
I love animals Jim, they give us unconditional love whereas human beings (some) have agendas. A lovely little dog you
must have been very kind to her, because she LOVES you.
Colette
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Hi Jim, Hope you don't mind but I have chosen your poems to read this night.
I love animals Jim, they give us unconditional love whereas human beings (some) have agendas. A lovely little dog you
must have been very kind to her, because she LOVES you.
Colette
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Colette, she was the very first dog that I fell in love and bonded with. My heart was broken the night she was killed. I can still see and feel her presence all around me each day. She was small, beautiful and very comforting. Thank you for picking this one to read and review,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from 9999pool
Little girl came into the home without much expectations. She only knew that she must love her papa and she did tried her best to give Papa the happiness he deserved.
She couldn't talk in a language Papa understands so she used her eyes as her way of expressing herself.
On the last day before she went to heaven, she tried to muttered a 'thank you' with a soft whine but her voice failed her.
In her eyes she told Papa. "I will always remember and love you, Papa. You take care and I shall watch over you for the love and kindness you have shown me. Goodbye."
Then she went away knowing that papa will be devastated and so she returned this 'get well' note to Papa.
A very touching story and I am sure Little Girl spoke to Papa through his pen when writing this note. Smiles.
Cheerio, great write and a very sentimental one too, bro Jim. :))
Best, Ritchie. :)) Hope all is still well on the home front. Take care and my prayers to both of you too.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Little girl came into the home without much expectations. She only knew that she must love her papa and she did tried her best to give Papa the happiness he deserved.
She couldn't talk in a language Papa understands so she used her eyes as her way of expressing herself.
On the last day before she went to heaven, she tried to muttered a 'thank you' with a soft whine but her voice failed her.
In her eyes she told Papa. "I will always remember and love you, Papa. You take care and I shall watch over you for the love and kindness you have shown me. Goodbye."
Then she went away knowing that papa will be devastated and so she returned this 'get well' note to Papa.
A very touching story and I am sure Little Girl spoke to Papa through his pen when writing this note. Smiles.
Cheerio, great write and a very sentimental one too, bro Jim. :))
Best, Ritchie. :)) Hope all is still well on the home front. Take care and my prayers to both of you too.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Ritchie, I have struggled everyday since my Little Girl was killed. Receiving your review has given me a new perspective concerning her death. Your words have helped me to look at my healing in a much better way. When I wrote this these words just flowed. It was her talking to me in the way she knew that I would understand. Thank you so much for the message of your review and great comments,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Jade Lawson
aww, really heart touching. Again you show the bond between you too, and how happy was her life and your life together. She helped through many hard moments. I hope that soon you can smile thinking about the good moments shared.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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aww, really heart touching. Again you show the bond between you too, and how happy was her life and your life together. She helped through many hard moments. I hope that soon you can smile thinking about the good moments shared.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013
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Angel, she was and still is the love of my life. Thank you for your review and warm comments. Your friend,,,,,,Jim
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Jim,
This is an heart rendering poem and I enjoyed it from the first line to the last. Your rhyme is strong, excellent word choices, the flow is smooth and I love the theme. Well done, God Bless...chey
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Hi Jim,
This is an heart rendering poem and I enjoyed it from the first line to the last. Your rhyme is strong, excellent word choices, the flow is smooth and I love the theme. Well done, God Bless...chey
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you chey for these 6 stars. I sent you a more in depth message thanking you,,,,,Jim
Comment from emjaihammond
What a lovely tribute to a very special pet. I think sometimes God sends us a special little pet like Little Girl when we most need them. They are truly a comfort and require and ask very little in return. You have a beautiful way of thinking of her and the poem is wonderful.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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What a lovely tribute to a very special pet. I think sometimes God sends us a special little pet like Little Girl when we most need them. They are truly a comfort and require and ask very little in return. You have a beautiful way of thinking of her and the poem is wonderful.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this review and understanding my feelings for her. I struggle everyday with the void that has been left from her death. She was my great little love and brought me hours of joy and comfort,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from pensee
Such a genuine and heartfelt letter. The pacing of it lets me imagine it as an illustrated story aimed for children to help with grieving. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Such a genuine and heartfelt letter. The pacing of it lets me imagine it as an illustrated story aimed for children to help with grieving. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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pensee, thank you for your great review and thoughts about this poem,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from barleygirl
Your poem is equal to the occasion. That is, is expresses the depth & sincerity & grief that you explain in the author's notes. I'm so very sorry for your loss. There's always that one dog that helps you thru the hardest stuff & there's such a bond. You've expresses this, but from a dog's point of view, so well. Great job! *smile*
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Your poem is equal to the occasion. That is, is expresses the depth & sincerity & grief that you explain in the author's notes. I'm so very sorry for your loss. There's always that one dog that helps you thru the hardest stuff & there's such a bond. You've expresses this, but from a dog's point of view, so well. Great job! *smile*
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you barleygirl for your excellent review and comforting comments. Little Girl was my rock of sorts,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Dustybones
I like the notation that your little girl was your loved dog. Yes sir, you moved me with this one as I love my Toy Fox Terrier. I often wonder if he would miss me. My daamn ex wife took two dogs and left me without closure with them a few years ago. That hurt more than losing her. I think I really HATE her for doing that, I get this feeling of badness whenever I think of never seeing my boys again. GRRRRRRR
But now I have my puppy named Mac! He takes all of my pain away, everyday.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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I like the notation that your little girl was your loved dog. Yes sir, you moved me with this one as I love my Toy Fox Terrier. I often wonder if he would miss me. My daamn ex wife took two dogs and left me without closure with them a few years ago. That hurt more than losing her. I think I really HATE her for doing that, I get this feeling of badness whenever I think of never seeing my boys again. GRRRRRRR
But now I have my puppy named Mac! He takes all of my pain away, everyday.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Sad that people use their beloved animals as leverage of hate. Taking away that is so important to create hurt.
Thank you so much Dustybones for the 6 stars and exceptional review and comments. Remember, no one can take Mac from you ever,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and beautiful hang onto your memories Jim our friend but try not to be sad your little girl wouldn't have wanted that well done regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Yes my friend this is well written and beautiful hang onto your memories Jim our friend but try not to be sad your little girl wouldn't have wanted that well done regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you Jill and Erick for your comments and excellent review,,,,,,regards,Jim
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very touching and beautiful. As an owner of three small doggies myself, I can relate to how close you felt to Little Girl. I still think lovingly of the doggy we had to put down when his cancer came back after surgery. It's always sad to lose a loved one, and pets are no exception.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Very touching and beautiful. As an owner of three small doggies myself, I can relate to how close you felt to Little Girl. I still think lovingly of the doggy we had to put down when his cancer came back after surgery. It's always sad to lose a loved one, and pets are no exception.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you Phyllis for your excellent and warm and sincere comments. I'm sorry for your loss,,,,,,,Jim
