kyoka (heavy fog covers)
kyoka--see auther notes20 total reviews
Comment from JM daSilva
A ghost playing a skeleton. Very nice picture, the bones can be a musical instrument. I guess you could get a hollow bone and make a flute too. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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A ghost playing a skeleton. Very nice picture, the bones can be a musical instrument. I guess you could get a hollow bone and make a flute too. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Sounds good. We have the beginnings of a musical group here, LOL. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
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Welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoy the way you poets are having fun with Halloween. It is such a fun holiday. I am not sure it's a true holiday, but anyway, I enjoyed reading your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I enjoy the way you poets are having fun with Halloween. It is such a fun holiday. I am not sure it's a true holiday, but anyway, I enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you, again. It is fun to try something different. Glad you enjoyed this~Debbie
Comment from Glasstruth
Very original. The enjambment works well as you write about music played on the ribs of a skeleton. Your ghost is very talented. Superb! Good luck with the contest. Les
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Very original. The enjambment works well as you write about music played on the ribs of a skeleton. Your ghost is very talented. Superb! Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem~Debbie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written again friend you done well using this form it reads strongly enhanced by the art work and made us smile regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Yes this is well written again friend you done well using this form it reads strongly enhanced by the art work and made us smile regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
I'm just wondering, is the ghost trying to 'tune' up the skeleton to go out with him to a Halloween party? mmmm just a thought! Can't get more eerie than that! Can you?
Great entry Debbie, all the best in the contest.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Hi Debbie,
I'm just wondering, is the ghost trying to 'tune' up the skeleton to go out with him to a Halloween party? mmmm just a thought! Can't get more eerie than that! Can you?
Great entry Debbie, all the best in the contest.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much, my friend. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem. Take care~Debbie xx
Comment from allborn66
This is an awesome poem. I love the word choice. The last two lines are incredible. I really think you nailed this poem.
Barbara
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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This is an awesome poem. I love the word choice. The last two lines are incredible. I really think you nailed this poem.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Kyoka is a great form, perfect for this Halloween poem you have written. I liked that the ghost was strumming the skeletons ribs. Very visual. :0 Carolyn
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Kyoka is a great form, perfect for this Halloween poem you have written. I liked that the ghost was strumming the skeletons ribs. Very visual. :0 Carolyn
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from cinderbella
I love this kyoka. First of all the artwork is fabulous. The poem is amusing.. music strummed on a skeletons's ribs by a ghost? LOL You are one creative lady. I loved it. Sandra
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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I love this kyoka. First of all the artwork is fabulous. The poem is amusing.. music strummed on a skeletons's ribs by a ghost? LOL You are one creative lady. I loved it. Sandra
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I'm not sure if it is creativity or insanity. LOL. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
My gratitude to you Debbie for sharing this wonderful written piece with fans, myself and other writers/readers. I enjoyed this short piece very much. It was very precise in its context in concept and well thought out imagery which is very much intended to intrigue one's mind during this season. Especially the image of the skeletons ribs being played and/or strummed by a ghost. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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My gratitude to you Debbie for sharing this wonderful written piece with fans, myself and other writers/readers. I enjoyed this short piece very much. It was very precise in its context in concept and well thought out imagery which is very much intended to intrigue one's mind during this season. Especially the image of the skeletons ribs being played and/or strummed by a ghost. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
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You are so welcome Debbie and I enjoyed it very much
Comment from SteveY
If that's not an imagination I just don't know what is! A skeleton's ribs strummed by a ghost! Very well thought up and perfectly written again!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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If that's not an imagination I just don't know what is! A skeleton's ribs strummed by a ghost! Very well thought up and perfectly written again!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I'm not sure if it is creativity or insanity. LOL. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
