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kyoka (heavy fog covers)

kyoka--see auther notes

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Comment from JM daSilva
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A ghost playing a skeleton. Very nice picture, the bones can be a musical instrument. I guess you could get a hollow bone and make a flute too. Nice.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
    Sounds good. We have the beginnings of a musical group here, LOL. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
reply by JM daSilva on 21-Oct-2013
    Welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoy the way you poets are having fun with Halloween. It is such a fun holiday. I am not sure it's a true holiday, but anyway, I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
    Thank you, again. It is fun to try something different. Glad you enjoyed this~Debbie
Comment from Glasstruth
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Very original. The enjambment works well as you write about music played on the ribs of a skeleton. Your ghost is very talented. Superb! Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem~Debbie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written again friend you done well using this form it reads strongly enhanced by the art work and made us smile regards Jill and Erick

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Debbie,
I'm just wondering, is the ghost trying to 'tune' up the skeleton to go out with him to a Halloween party? mmmm just a thought! Can't get more eerie than that! Can you?
Great entry Debbie, all the best in the contest.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
    Thank you so much, my friend. Glad you enjoyed my creepy little poem. Take care~Debbie xx
Comment from allborn66
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This is an awesome poem. I love the word choice. The last two lines are incredible. I really think you nailed this poem.
Barbara

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Kyoka is a great form, perfect for this Halloween poem you have written. I liked that the ghost was strumming the skeletons ribs. Very visual. :0 Carolyn

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from cinderbella
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I love this kyoka. First of all the artwork is fabulous. The poem is amusing.. music strummed on a skeletons's ribs by a ghost? LOL You are one creative lady. I loved it. Sandra

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thank you. I'm not sure if it is creativity or insanity. LOL. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
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My gratitude to you Debbie for sharing this wonderful written piece with fans, myself and other writers/readers. I enjoyed this short piece very much. It was very precise in its context in concept and well thought out imagery which is very much intended to intrigue one's mind during this season. Especially the image of the skeletons ribs being played and/or strummed by a ghost. You have a good one and God bless.
AK

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie
reply by krys123 on 30-Oct-2013
    You are so welcome Debbie and I enjoyed it very much
Comment from SteveY
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If that's not an imagination I just don't know what is! A skeleton's ribs strummed by a ghost! Very well thought up and perfectly written again!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thank you. I'm not sure if it is creativity or insanity. LOL. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie