The Bounty Hunter
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This was so enjoyable. Your descriptions setting the
scene, taking us there.
It's such a pleasure to
read work well presented and understandable, which
makes it a pleasure to read rather than a chore.
well-trained
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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This was so enjoyable. Your descriptions setting the
scene, taking us there.
It's such a pleasure to
read work well presented and understandable, which
makes it a pleasure to read rather than a chore.
well-trained
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much, Margaret. I have learned a lot from great writers like yourself on FanStory.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A different time; a different place, but this is Elric of Melnebone-influenced, and skillfully done as the immortal prince manifests as a bounty hunter and soul-eating sword becomes a colt .45 in service to a new demon. I like it. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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A different time; a different place, but this is Elric of Melnebone-influenced, and skillfully done as the immortal prince manifests as a bounty hunter and soul-eating sword becomes a colt .45 in service to a new demon. I like it. :) Nancy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much. I am unfamiliar with Elric of Melnebone. Is that an English legend? Where do I find it?
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It's decades old. Fantasy antihero in an alternative Earth. The Elric Saga by Michael Moorcock. It's pretty dark, but excellent writing.
Comment from pickthorn
A well written story with a strange twist. The bounty hunter's colt speaks to him through vibration. Good suspense, good description of characthers and area. Overall,
very good work.
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A well written story with a strange twist. The bounty hunter's colt speaks to him through vibration. Good suspense, good description of characthers and area. Overall,
very good work.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much
Comment from Nikitapoetry
"Two years is the deal.
His wounds I will heal.
He will have my protection.
Your soul, added to my collection!"
just amazing ! :)
keep it up :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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"Two years is the deal.
His wounds I will heal.
He will have my protection.
Your soul, added to my collection!"
just amazing ! :)
keep it up :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much. I was thinking of adding to this.
Comment from lindalcreel
The colt was just the medium that he used to get the job done. A debt has to be paid. When you sell your soul to the devil, it's a promise that he will not forget. Sometimes we do crazy things in the name of love; in this case a brothers love, but in the end the price needs to be paid. Excellent read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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The colt was just the medium that he used to get the job done. A debt has to be paid. When you sell your soul to the devil, it's a promise that he will not forget. Sometimes we do crazy things in the name of love; in this case a brothers love, but in the end the price needs to be paid. Excellent read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much. We surely do.
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Welcome:)
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Welcome:)
Comment from Generous George
Scary and well written. The idea of the Colt that vibrates is clever and moves the story along.
I wish the boy had shot faster. :)
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Scary and well written. The idea of the Colt that vibrates is clever and moves the story along.
I wish the boy had shot faster. :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, this is such a sorrowful story! I pictured the scene easily with your vivid description. I had a bit of difficulty understanding that the Hunter was speaking to his gun in the beginning, but it made sense as I read on. Best of luck in this contest with this very creative and unusual tale.
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Oh, this is such a sorrowful story! I pictured the scene easily with your vivid description. I had a bit of difficulty understanding that the Hunter was speaking to his gun in the beginning, but it made sense as I read on. Best of luck in this contest with this very creative and unusual tale.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
Comment from GWinterwin
While this was a good story. A scary story and yet something that no doubt is very real in our world today. Telling of dope, deception and death. It's a story to make one really think.
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While this was a good story. A scary story and yet something that no doubt is very real in our world today. Telling of dope, deception and death. It's a story to make one really think.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
Comment from michaelcahill
This is an excellent story. Not my cup of tea usually but, you have made it compelling with stirring imagery and writing. I see in your notes that you may not be exactly keen on the subject matter. But, I am sure I speak for many when I say I would dearly hope for more of this. well done to say the least. mike
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This is an excellent story. Not my cup of tea usually but, you have made it compelling with stirring imagery and writing. I see in your notes that you may not be exactly keen on the subject matter. But, I am sure I speak for many when I say I would dearly hope for more of this. well done to say the least. mike
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
Comment from w.j.debi
Creepy? Scary? Haunting? I don't know the right word for this. It certainly was a captivating read. I wasn't sure what I had gotten into, but I had to keep going.
One little grammar point--I think you mean "its wants" in this sentence:
The evil weapon couldn't speak but it did communicate it wants, and the hunter waited for its signal.
Could become a series or a novel. Excellent story.
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Creepy? Scary? Haunting? I don't know the right word for this. It certainly was a captivating read. I wasn't sure what I had gotten into, but I had to keep going.
One little grammar point--I think you mean "its wants" in this sentence:
The evil weapon couldn't speak but it did communicate it wants, and the hunter waited for its signal.
Could become a series or a novel. Excellent story.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
