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Love, Time, and Death51 total reviews
Comment from JennaG
I enjoyed your story very much. It grabbed my attention from the start and kept me interested all the way through. I couldn't wait to see where the ghost was going to come in. I noticed one very small typo in the first paragraph. I think you're missing the word "it" in the sentence "Maybe you can make." Just thought I'd point that out in case you hadn't caught it already. This was a very good story and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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I enjoyed your story very much. It grabbed my attention from the start and kept me interested all the way through. I couldn't wait to see where the ghost was going to come in. I noticed one very small typo in the first paragraph. I think you're missing the word "it" in the sentence "Maybe you can make." Just thought I'd point that out in case you hadn't caught it already. This was a very good story and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you vey much. Good catch. I will fix that.
