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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Certainly a thought-provoking Couplet Query poem.
Honestly I'm not sure I've succeeded in answering the question but I've certainly thought about it.
A clever style and format and great picture and presentation.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Certainly a thought-provoking Couplet Query poem.
Honestly I'm not sure I've succeeded in answering the question but I've certainly thought about it.
A clever style and format and great picture and presentation.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much Shirley.
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a new form to me. Well thought out. Clearly written with rhyme and visual imagery. Great accompanying photograph too. Fabulous!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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That's a new form to me. Well thought out. Clearly written with rhyme and visual imagery. Great accompanying photograph too. Fabulous!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. That because I just created it.
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You're so talented. Glad to know you :)
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent question asked in an excellent format.
One for the life of me I cannot answer. If you are an optimist you've hit bottom an go up. If you are a pessimist you've farther down to go. Thanks for the brain teaser. If the answer is contained in the question I can't see it.
Preston
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent question asked in an excellent format.
One for the life of me I cannot answer. If you are an optimist you've hit bottom an go up. If you are a pessimist you've farther down to go. Thanks for the brain teaser. If the answer is contained in the question I can't see it.
Preston
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thanks Preston. It is not in the question, it's in the author's notes.
Comment from GregoryCody
Hmm interesting. I've yet to try this. Maybe I will. I love this. Very good form here, after I researched it. Great verbiage and a compelling question. All in all I very much like it. Good rhyming. Can they be near rhymes too? Nicely done!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Hmm interesting. I've yet to try this. Maybe I will. I love this. Very good form here, after I researched it. Great verbiage and a compelling question. All in all I very much like it. Good rhyming. Can they be near rhymes too? Nicely done!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thanks Gregory. Yes, I believe in near rhymes.
Comment from Dean Kuch
My answer to this query is don't sup from the cup in the first place, Mr. 'T'...
You claim that the answer to this question set to couplet query is in the poem itself. I don't see it. Perhaps I'm loosing my sensitivity perception and you can enlighten me?
Even so, I liked the overall presentation...
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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My answer to this query is don't sup from the cup in the first place, Mr. 'T'...
You claim that the answer to this question set to couplet query is in the poem itself. I don't see it. Perhaps I'm loosing my sensitivity perception and you can enlighten me?
Even so, I liked the overall presentation...
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thanks Dean. Actually it was in the author notes.
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Oh, I see t now. I saw everything but that, "The answer is within you..."
Got'cha, thanks, Tom...
Comment from marycec
What a profound question in such a short form. You have internal rhymes in sup and cup and there and where. Might try this myself sometime.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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What a profound question in such a short form. You have internal rhymes in sup and cup and there and where. Might try this myself sometime.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you Mary. Yes, please do.
Comment from emrpoems
Beautiful Couplet Query. Compelling pairing of picture and theme. Great title too. Best of luck with you writing. good imagination
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Beautiful Couplet Query. Compelling pairing of picture and theme. Great title too. Best of luck with you writing. good imagination
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much emrpoems.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
When you SUP from the CUP Internal rhyme
of bitterness and woe, strong imagery
Then the question remains,
from THERE, WHERE do you go? Internal rhyme
My, you are experimenting. Well done.
Regards:
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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When you SUP from the CUP Internal rhyme
of bitterness and woe, strong imagery
Then the question remains,
from THERE, WHERE do you go? Internal rhyme
My, you are experimenting. Well done.
Regards:
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you Stephen. Yes I am.
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Dear TOM: Well deserved.
PS:Just posted #20
Cheers: Steve C
Comment from mumsyone
When you sup from the cup of bitterness and woe,
Then the question remains, from there, where do you go?
An interesting form and a good question in your couplet query. Nice presentation, too.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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When you sup from the cup of bitterness and woe,
Then the question remains, from there, where do you go?
An interesting form and a good question in your couplet query. Nice presentation, too.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013
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Thank you mumsyone.
