Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 94 "Floating Garden Tableau"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from ravenblack
Needless to say, like the potted shape of the poem. But really, slipping in water color as a painting of the scene of the floating plants reflected on water was really cool.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Needless to say, like the potted shape of the poem. But really, slipping in water color as a painting of the scene of the floating plants reflected on water was really cool.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you ravenblack.
Comment from Sararb
Another introduction to a different style of poetry. I love this one, and the beautiful floating garden that you describe so well in your poem. Great job! Sara :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Another introduction to a different style of poetry. I love this one, and the beautiful floating garden that you describe so well in your poem. Great job! Sara :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sara. Give one a try.
Comment from Capricorn30
Nice artwork! I would love to have an entryway such as this one!
A well-penned poem which nicely complements the illustration--"red, greens, and blues" finely complete so serene a writing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Nice artwork! I would love to have an entryway such as this one!
A well-penned poem which nicely complements the illustration--"red, greens, and blues" finely complete so serene a writing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you Margaret. I'd love that entry too!
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treischel,
This is a fantastic poem about a floating garden, you wrote it so well and the picture did come to mind as I read it.
Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Aloha Treischel,
This is a fantastic poem about a floating garden, you wrote it so well and the picture did come to mind as I read it.
Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ginger. I glad that you saw it.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Visually appealing picture re-inforces the beauty mirrored in the chosen words.
Very clever word choices combine to produce the "picture"in my mind that the tableau poem is meant to achieve.
The structure of a tableau poem is adhered to with each of the six lines having a count of six syllables per line.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Visually appealing picture re-inforces the beauty mirrored in the chosen words.
Very clever word choices combine to produce the "picture"in my mind that the tableau poem is meant to achieve.
The structure of a tableau poem is adhered to with each of the six lines having a count of six syllables per line.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you Shirley.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
This is an excellent poem. It meets all of the requirements of the tableau form. It has beautiful images in figurative language. A picture of a garden in water comes to mind as I read it.
Preston
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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This is an excellent poem. It meets all of the requirements of the tableau form. It has beautiful images in figurative language. A picture of a garden in water comes to mind as I read it.
Preston
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you Preston. It's good to know.
Comment from sunnilicious
That is a nice pond. The poem came out really good too. Great!
The style is fairly new. I read up on the poet and poetic style last week. Interesting stuff.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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That is a nice pond. The poem came out really good too. Great!
The style is fairly new. I read up on the poet and poetic style last week. Interesting stuff.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. Yes, it is interesting. I reviewed one from somebody recently. Wasn't that you?
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I haven't tried the tableau style out yet. Have a goodnite :)
Comment from SteveY
Yes they are all beautiful to look at and enjoy. Where would we be without them? Excellent job once again in coming up with this little jewel.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Yes they are all beautiful to look at and enjoy. Where would we be without them? Excellent job once again in coming up with this little jewel.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much SteveY.
Comment from steevie
A simple and entertaining poem. It gives the thought of plants literally floating in water whilst I'm sure they have roots which reach the bottom of the pond they're in.
steve
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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A simple and entertaining poem. It gives the thought of plants literally floating in water whilst I'm sure they have roots which reach the bottom of the pond they're in.
steve
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you steevie. Yes the do.
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you're welcome. Yes, they do float or yes they do have roots to the bottom of the pond?
steve
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you're welcome. Yes, they do float or yes they do have roots to the bottom of the pond?
steve
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you're welcome. Yes, they do float or yes they do have roots to the bottom of the pond?
steve
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They have long dangling roots to the bottom while leaves and flowers float on top.
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oh, okay, thank you for clarifying that my friend
steve
