Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Blessed by Beauty"Small and Specialty Poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Fine flowers festoon ... ah .. this is a Treischel line to be sure!
Dear author himself, I love the picture you took - Como Park and the Froggie watering place seems to be a personal delight...
Tom, Tom (the piper's son!) ... I'm trying so hard to keep up with reviewing your beauties!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Fine flowers festoon ... ah .. this is a Treischel line to be sure!
Dear author himself, I love the picture you took - Como Park and the Froggie watering place seems to be a personal delight...
Tom, Tom (the piper's son!) ... I'm trying so hard to keep up with reviewing your beauties!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sonali. Appreciate that very much.
Comment from 9999pool
Along this beautiful filled with flowers and stones as well as other bits of nature, we can smell the fragrance each flower beams to us.
Their welcome fragrance guide our nostrils to discovering nature's secret of beauty and awe.
Let us walk through this flower garden path to know how lucky we were that nature had open her summer costume for us to admire.
Great write and penned well this reversed Rhyming Quatrains write.
Cheerio, Rithcie. :))
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Along this beautiful filled with flowers and stones as well as other bits of nature, we can smell the fragrance each flower beams to us.
Their welcome fragrance guide our nostrils to discovering nature's secret of beauty and awe.
Let us walk through this flower garden path to know how lucky we were that nature had open her summer costume for us to admire.
Great write and penned well this reversed Rhyming Quatrains write.
Cheerio, Rithcie. :))
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ritchie,
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treischel,
You are truly blessed with beauty and the ability to appreciate it. I love your photography as much as the inspirational words.
Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Aloha Treischel,
You are truly blessed with beauty and the ability to appreciate it. I love your photography as much as the inspirational words.
Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you Ginger. You are so sweet.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A lovely presentation and stunning picture.
Your chosen style and descriptive words blend perfectly together.
A very effective and clever style you have devised here.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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A lovely presentation and stunning picture.
Your chosen style and descriptive words blend perfectly together.
A very effective and clever style you have devised here.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thank you. Just experimenting a bit.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This an excellent poem with good,rhyme meter and figurative language and imagery. I enjoyed reading this one. It also has good unconventional visually appealing structure.
Preston
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This an excellent poem with good,rhyme meter and figurative language and imagery. I enjoyed reading this one. It also has good unconventional visually appealing structure.
Preston
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thanks Preston.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Fine flowers festoon, 'f' allits
And give off perfume,
When one walks the fine floral trail, "
So blessed by bright beauty's detail. 'b's
Can be no travail,
Where colors unveil,
The essence of joy they assume LOVE...essence of joy
As they show off summer's costume. SHOE OFF=brilliant
Experimenting again are you? Well done.
Regards:
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Fine flowers festoon, 'f' allits
And give off perfume,
When one walks the fine floral trail, "
So blessed by bright beauty's detail. 'b's
Can be no travail,
Where colors unveil,
The essence of joy they assume LOVE...essence of joy
As they show off summer's costume. SHOE OFF=brilliant
Experimenting again are you? Well done.
Regards:
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thank you Stephen. Yup, just seeing what works.
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
Nice alliteration incorporated into the first stanza: I so enjoy "Fine flowers festoon";
"summer's costume"--indeed the season displays her finest.
A lovely illustration also.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Excellent!
Nice alliteration incorporated into the first stanza: I so enjoy "Fine flowers festoon";
"summer's costume"--indeed the season displays her finest.
A lovely illustration also.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thank you Margaret. I appreciate your comments after another reviewer thought my rhyming was stilted and forced.
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"stilted and forced"--WHAT?!
I see nothing of this in your writing, how can writing about nature--first and foremost, be forced?
I don't see any "force" in your writings--I see lovely poems which easily flow from your thoughts. Is this individual a new member? Sometimes newcomers think they already quite experienced.
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No, he is a playwrite and considers himself a literary critic.
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Would you happen to be referring to "Ekim77"? I find he is very harsh, and doesn't use much tact. He feels that my latest writing incorporates too many adjectives--well, you know what--I told him I have a fondness for adjectives, but I used tact.
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You are right on target.
Comment from Ekim777
Often I think, rhymes are overrated especially when rhythm and cadence is sacrificed to them. When they come naturally they can be fine otherwise they might be forced and spurious. Still our author does capture something of nature's beauty. It seems a picture does tell a thousand words. Although our poet does handle his words niftily enough -Ekim777
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Often I think, rhymes are overrated especially when rhythm and cadence is sacrificed to them. When they come naturally they can be fine otherwise they might be forced and spurious. Still our author does capture something of nature's beauty. It seems a picture does tell a thousand words. Although our poet does handle his words niftily enough -Ekim777
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thanks Ekim777 for the review and appreciating the picture.
