Grandchildren
The joy of grandchildren.......10 total reviews
Comment from songbyrd
To have grandchildren in our lives is truly a joy..as they say, If we'd known they were this much fun we'd have had them long ago..lol I enjoyed Best of luck..
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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To have grandchildren in our lives is truly a joy..as they say, If we'd known they were this much fun we'd have had them long ago..lol I enjoyed Best of luck..
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the excellent review. So glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a great weekend!
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
My dad used to teasingly tell us that if had had known how wonderful grandchildren were he'd have skipped the children part and went right to the grandchildren. We knew he was kidding as he adored all of us. Great poem. God loves you and so do we.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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My dad used to teasingly tell us that if had had known how wonderful grandchildren were he'd have skipped the children part and went right to the grandchildren. We knew he was kidding as he adored all of us. Great poem. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and great comments.
Have a great weekend!
Comment from Bobbi22
Very nice monorhyme all the way through. I have heard of all the happiness grandchildren bring - it is obviously true for you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Very nice monorhyme all the way through. I have heard of all the happiness grandchildren bring - it is obviously true for you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2013
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Thank you for this excellent review and great comments.
Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hell author good another grand ma/pa ( like me) who like to spoil their grand children . I like your happy thoughts fun to read and review.
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Hell author good another grand ma/pa ( like me) who like to spoil their grand children . I like your happy thoughts fun to read and review.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and great comments.
Glad you enjoyed the poem!
Comment from mumsyone
A nice tribute to grandchildren. I'm sure many reviewers on the site can relate to it. Good subject and entry for this contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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A nice tribute to grandchildren. I'm sure many reviewers on the site can relate to it. Good subject and entry for this contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and great comments.
Glad you enjoyed the poem!
Comment from Gravell
Wonderful poem and excellent rhyming. You've definitely nailed it. Your presentation is perfect to the title of your poem. Do I see a double space after gift? Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Wonderful poem and excellent rhyming. You've definitely nailed it. Your presentation is perfect to the title of your poem. Do I see a double space after gift? Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and great comments.
You did a see a double space - thanks for being observant.
Glad you enjoyed the poem!
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is a very well written poem my friend. I had to reread this poem three times before I realized how good it was. It had nothing to do with your ability - it was me - just waking up I guess... It now makes perfectly good sense to me. It is told in a very interesting way, and it held my attention, obviously. My only gripe is the flow of the last stanza. It's out of whack with the rest. Other than that, it is excellent.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This is a very well written poem my friend. I had to reread this poem three times before I realized how good it was. It had nothing to do with your ability - it was me - just waking up I guess... It now makes perfectly good sense to me. It is told in a very interesting way, and it held my attention, obviously. My only gripe is the flow of the last stanza. It's out of whack with the rest. Other than that, it is excellent.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments. I appreciated you feedback on the last stanza and am working it.
Glad you enjoyed the poem....Thank you....
Comment from Whitemorn
I'm so happy for you!
Can we trade grandchildren? LOL! ;)
Nice poem written by a proud grandparent!
Best regards, Whitemorn :)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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I'm so happy for you!
Can we trade grandchildren? LOL! ;)
Nice poem written by a proud grandparent!
Best regards, Whitemorn :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and great comments
which made me smile! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Wow that's a lot of "...ays"
I see a lot of love for what makes you happy. I like to guess these authors and I have an idea who you are. ;)
Good luck in the contest!
Jewell
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Wow that's a lot of "...ays"
I see a lot of love for what makes you happy. I like to guess these authors and I have an idea who you are. ;)
Good luck in the contest!
Jewell
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and great comments
which made me smile! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from SteveY
Well, what can I say? Hey, I know what I'll say, you did a great job with this one today! No matter what they say, this one will make ones day!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Well, what can I say? Hey, I know what I'll say, you did a great job with this one today! No matter what they say, this one will make ones day!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and great comments
which made me smile! Glad you enjoyed the poem.