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A Birthday Surprise

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6 total reviews 
Comment from Lovinia
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Hi Sandra

A cute and unique little tale which I think children would enjoy. A poem that makes a child think. Also a great message ..... what a great idea that Santa should have his own surprise, when he brings so many surprises to child and adult alike. :)) Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I love the presentation. You bring all the fun of Christmas, and add a great sense of mystery .... I didn't expect the jump to Santa's birthday, despite the obvious 'hint' with your image'. DUH!! My only excuse, I haven't had my morning coffee yet....... though I think I used that excuse yesterday when I left my car keys on the check-out counter (buying milk to add to the coffee I hadn't yet had). If you know what I mean??? Hahahahah! I enjoyed your poem. Not a winner in the contest ... yet still a winner. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxoxoxo


 Comment Written 05-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
    LOL, Lovinia, I know exactly what you mean, my eyelids won't lift until I can smell the lovely aroma of my coffee. Thank you for your lovely review. I am so pleased you liked it. :) xsx
Comment from angelface2
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Well-written poem. Rhythm was good and rhyming too. too cute for words. I think the last line should say They gave him a present... Makes more sense. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Miss Sally. I don't know how I missed that, it was on my draft but I lost it when I put it on here. Thank you for pointing it out, that was kind of you. :)
reply by angelface2 on 26-Aug-2013
    Hey that can happen. I've done it myself! Teehee Miss Sally
Comment from RYME4U
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This is very well done.I like how it builds up to the ending surprise. The rhyme and rhythm and well chosen words are all written very well. You have done a good job!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
    Thank you so much for your lovely review! :)
Comment from Sueellen11
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What a wonderful children's poem, a poem that should be in a children's book, this s a great entry into write a children's poem, excellent great imagery, great rhyming and flow, good luck, blessings sueellen

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much! :)
Comment from SteveY
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A great little very creative and imaginative poem. A wonderful verse that is destined to become a new nursery rhyme or story to be told at birthdays or christmas.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much, what a lovely thing to say! :)
Comment from lorijean
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a nice little poem about the children remembering Santa's birthday, such a lovely topic, well written and a pleasure to read....

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
    Thank you so much, Lorijean! :)