Mike Radshaw and the Black Dawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Keeping an Eye on Hell - BD4"The grim reaper casts his pall over London
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
WTF Mike "My hands felt like I'd been tossing off (in some countries that's a little risky...smirks)hedgehogs, and the bastards spunked (are you kidding me?) acid."
Well that certainly got my attention. Now back to the story ...
Holy smokes baby boy this one is gonna get a sixer out of me. Was riveted to every last word in the chapter and that doesn't happen often. Fucking fantastic writing mate! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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WTF Mike "My hands felt like I'd been tossing off (in some countries that's a little risky...smirks)hedgehogs, and the bastards spunked (are you kidding me?) acid."
Well that certainly got my attention. Now back to the story ...
Holy smokes baby boy this one is gonna get a sixer out of me. Was riveted to every last word in the chapter and that doesn't happen often. Fucking fantastic writing mate! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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lol, thanks so much, Deborah :-). Glad that opening line caught your attention, lol. Mike Radshaw is definitely one of my favourite characters. I'm really glad you enjoyed this slice of his psyche.
Mike
Comment from Sasha
It was worth the wait. Just hope I don't have another year to wait for the next one. This is so well written I really don't know what I can possibly say to tell you how much I liked this one, so you'll just have to settle for "WOW!"
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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It was worth the wait. Just hope I don't have another year to wait for the next one. This is so well written I really don't know what I can possibly say to tell you how much I liked this one, so you'll just have to settle for "WOW!"
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, my friend :-). One of these days, I will write a full length Mike Radshaw novel. For now, I'll have to content myself with finishing this long-short story. What will happen when Radshaw enters Mr Black's domain? ...
Mike
Comment from lindalcreel
Love, love, love this Michael. I can't wait to read the next chapters. I've got a little time before I have to get back to writing. So glad, you continue with the humor. It's what makes this gruesome tale so much more enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Love, love, love this Michael. I can't wait to read the next chapters. I've got a little time before I have to get back to writing. So glad, you continue with the humor. It's what makes this gruesome tale so much more enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Linda :-). I love writing this character and his nutty sense of humour - only trouble is, it can be hard to keep it up, which is why there is such a long break between some chapters. Still, the end is close for this one and I'm already part way through the next chapter. It was going to be three chapters, then four. Now I'm thinking probably six. Mr Radshaw likes to talk, and I like to let him, lol!
Mike
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Don't you love the way your story grows? My story was going to be three books now who knows
