thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Dad I'm sorry"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
4 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
OMG! I would not want to live with this much
guilt and regret. It is very powerful in the
'feelings' department, for sure.
I am so sorry for your loss. Be kind to yourself
and forgive. I am sure he hears you and knows you
love him.
Best of luck.
Marie
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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OMG! I would not want to live with this much
guilt and regret. It is very powerful in the
'feelings' department, for sure.
I am so sorry for your loss. Be kind to yourself
and forgive. I am sure he hears you and knows you
love him.
Best of luck.
Marie
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review I have learned a lot through all of this and the most important thing is God knows what is best for us.
Comment from Jackarrie
You wrote this poem at a very sad time in your life after losing your Dad, also you suffered with watching your son go through his ordeal with cancer. It is obvious this poem was written from the heart.
Well done. and good luck in the competition. Mary
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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You wrote this poem at a very sad time in your life after losing your Dad, also you suffered with watching your son go through his ordeal with cancer. It is obvious this poem was written from the heart.
Well done. and good luck in the competition. Mary
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review I was sad when my dad died but I know that with his passing came healing.God is good
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh how sad......your emotions were so high ....so sorry for your loss.....,
And I am so happy that your son Boo beat cancer.....won't heaven be great for reunions.........God bless
I liked this poem
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Oh how sad......your emotions were so high ....so sorry for your loss.....,
And I am so happy that your son Boo beat cancer.....won't heaven be great for reunions.........God bless
I liked this poem
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review I am truly blessed.My son is doing great, and God is using him in the most remarkable ways.and yes what a reunion we will have when we get to heaven God bless you to
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a very sad poem. One written with a lot of feeling and emotion making a good contest entry. Your father does know that you love him, no matter what you did or didn't do or say before he died. Don't hang on to the regrets and shoulda coulda's. Best of luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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This is a very sad poem. One written with a lot of feeling and emotion making a good contest entry. Your father does know that you love him, no matter what you did or didn't do or say before he died. Don't hang on to the regrets and shoulda coulda's. Best of luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review,I can only thank God for the peace in my heart and the joy of the wonderful memories I have of my dad.When I lay it down at the foot of the cross and asked for forgiveness Jesus said yes, GOD IS GOOD