Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A well-penned, science fiction writing as beams from alien weaponry would indeed terrify one, both alien life forms and weapons anxiously having earthlings fleeing the scene!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013

Thanks Margaret. Just a bit of silliness.

reply by Capricorn30 on 07-Aug-2013

You're welcome:)
It was a fun read!

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Gorgeous, harmless looking picture to complement this little poem. Your 1-6-1 fulfills all the requirements and sounded nice. Nice scream to end with:)

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013

Thanks Ine.

reply by robina1978 on 07-Aug-2013

very welcome, Ine

Comment from CornishChick

Excellent

I will continue to read your poems and rate them and leave feedback because I want to encourage you to press on. You are a blessing w/ so few words. You have a great gift. I don't care how many contests you win/lose. In my book, you are the greatest. I absolutely adore your humor!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013

Thank you ashowalter, that keeps me going.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
You have about done it: proved that good poetry can be written in any number of lines with any number of syllables per line. The rhyme and flow of this are good. I like this one. Reminds me of the days I spent a stolen hour from working in the garden with Flash Gordon.
Preston

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013

Thanks Preston. Good old Flash Gordon.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

There were no weapons used on The Jetsons. I watched every episode when I was little. So I don't like the picture. But good rhyme. Excellent

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013

Thank you sunnilicious . The Jetsons were fun to watch.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'll be sure to watch out for those aliens. This one gave me a smile. Of course, that could change to a scream if one of those aliens turns up with that gun. LOL

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013

Thanks Cindy. You made me smile with your review.

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

A nicely written 1-6-1 poem. The rhyming is consistent. The poem itself is humorous. The flow of the poem is good. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013

thanks in777wr#. Glad you took the time to write a review longer than the poem.

reply by in777wr# on 07-Aug-2013

LOL. You're welcome.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Now this is like a underwear commercial "Brief" heheh just had to throw that one in its ok if you throw it out Mr T I would.
Interesting format you did well getting 8 syllables to jell
know what I mean Mr Gleam Ok Ok you would rather have Hawaiian Mermaid review you than me hehehehe
tk

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2013

Thanks TK ill take a review from either of you. Your both great.