Comment from kleck140

Excellent

Very ponderous. You state several thoughts in different
venues. This could be several different thoughts if the substance would be sorted in catagories. You definitely have a writing ability but need to complete one thought before starting the other. Don't get discouraged, you do have a writing ability, just tempered a bit. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

fate-fortune admission test exam,Indeed one has to have fate. that's a very hearfelt expressed story. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

My friend, you have a very well written tribute to God, and Heaven. And you include a look at Hell's lineup. It was easy to understand, and it was interesting. It held my attention, and I really enjoyed reading it.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

Comment from Darla9

Average

I see that you are taking over the Fanstory tonight. :) I appreciate your hard work and the fact that you have a lot to share. Unfortunately, once again I found it very confusing. It just sounds like you are rambling on and you are the only one that actually knows what you are rambling on about.

Even your Author Notes confused the bejesus out of me.

Try a different style. Connect to your readers. Unless you're just writing for yourself.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013

Comment from 88daren

Excellent

Growing up in the southeast and doing the bulk of my travels there, I hear a lot of fire and brimstone speeches and I dare say rants. But I do appreciate and articulate and well versed thought, regardless of my personal beliefs. Well done sir.

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 Comment Written 31-Jul-2013