FATE -- Fortune Admission Test Exam
No escape from the FATE. Please read Notes. 262 words65 total reviews
Comment from Jonesy
A number of SPAG mistakes and writing that won't appeal to many because the author wrote this not for the audience, but for the author.
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A number of SPAG mistakes and writing that won't appeal to many because the author wrote this not for the audience, but for the author.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from EMB
Wow. That's an interesting concept. I never imagined there being some kind of standardized test that we may have to pass before getting through the golden gates. This was unique. :)
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Wow. That's an interesting concept. I never imagined there being some kind of standardized test that we may have to pass before getting through the golden gates. This was unique. :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Some of the best work are inspired by dreams, and this is no exception. I love how you pack so much into so little. Another great work, my friend.
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Some of the best work are inspired by dreams, and this is no exception. I love how you pack so much into so little. Another great work, my friend.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from cvcopac
My first thought was that you were indulging in sarcasm, but after a re-read and some thought, see that's not so. Gods flock are headed in one direction--the sinners in an opposite direction. The noun 'Fate' is the metaphor of spiritual success. As applied by the author. I like the quirky syntax--it grows on me. Kenny
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My first thought was that you were indulging in sarcasm, but after a re-read and some thought, see that's not so. Gods flock are headed in one direction--the sinners in an opposite direction. The noun 'Fate' is the metaphor of spiritual success. As applied by the author. I like the quirky syntax--it grows on me. Kenny
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Teresa Paul
You always review my work and I thought it was just about time I took a look at the sweet man that is always so kind and generous to me. Here goes: I think you are very bright and that intelligence is abundantly present in your writing. I think you must be a professor or a teacher after reading this. I am not quite sure whether or not you believe in God. I do and I found your work not at all offensive but very informative. Well done. Yours, Teresa.
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You always review my work and I thought it was just about time I took a look at the sweet man that is always so kind and generous to me. Here goes: I think you are very bright and that intelligence is abundantly present in your writing. I think you must be a professor or a teacher after reading this. I am not quite sure whether or not you believe in God. I do and I found your work not at all offensive but very informative. Well done. Yours, Teresa.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from elchupakabra
is on road to immortality - that was the only typo I saw. Though I fundamentally disagree with the concept of Heaven in the way it is now generally conceived in N.America, I can certainly appreciate your thoughts and opinions, which are once again expressed in a non-sententious manner and writ with a wry intellect and a rich, elegant prose. Excellent work again. Always a pleasure.
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is on road to immortality - that was the only typo I saw. Though I fundamentally disagree with the concept of Heaven in the way it is now generally conceived in N.America, I can certainly appreciate your thoughts and opinions, which are once again expressed in a non-sententious manner and writ with a wry intellect and a rich, elegant prose. Excellent work again. Always a pleasure.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from visionary1234
Al, this one's truly awful. Honestly. But that's just my perspective. The platitudes drive me nuts but I can't help still trying to follow your tangential thinking, and for that I applaud you!
:)S
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Al, this one's truly awful. Honestly. But that's just my perspective. The platitudes drive me nuts but I can't help still trying to follow your tangential thinking, and for that I applaud you!
:)S
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from donaldww
Hi Al,
You are turning into a prose dynamo. Good opening paragraph. The reader is on the way to heaven, and link up with heaven dwellers. Plus other inhabitants.
The explanation of heaven is not actually available, is with God in heaven. It's all FATE.
Or so say thee.
Cheers,
DW
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Hi Al,
You are turning into a prose dynamo. Good opening paragraph. The reader is on the way to heaven, and link up with heaven dwellers. Plus other inhabitants.
The explanation of heaven is not actually available, is with God in heaven. It's all FATE.
Or so say thee.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Cookie333
It seems the examination is from a higher source and is not written at all. We must strive to 'live' as God would want and practice the same,
thank you my friend,
k
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It seems the examination is from a higher source and is not written at all. We must strive to 'live' as God would want and practice the same,
thank you my friend,
k
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Dean Kuch
Matthew 6:32-34
...32"For the Gentiles eagerly seek all these things; for your heavenly Father knows that you need all these things. 33"But seek first His kingdom and His righteousness, and all these things will be added to you. 34"So do not worry about tomorrow; for tomorrow will care for itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own.
The Bible has a pretty good response to what you've written here, Al. It says it much, much better than I ever could.
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Matthew 6:32-34
...32"For the Gentiles eagerly seek all these things; for your heavenly Father knows that you need all these things. 33"But seek first His kingdom and His righteousness, and all these things will be added to you. 34"So do not worry about tomorrow; for tomorrow will care for itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own.
The Bible has a pretty good response to what you've written here, Al. It says it much, much better than I ever could.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
