FATE -- Fortune Admission Test Exam
No escape from the FATE. Please read Notes. 262 words65 total reviews
Comment from Norbanus
A challenge to the point of view,
that guidance can't exist.
The pamphlets tell you what to do.
My, how they persist
The guides to God lay down their path.
One dares not question why.
Else you will stir up Heaven's wrath,
be dead before you die
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A challenge to the point of view,
that guidance can't exist.
The pamphlets tell you what to do.
My, how they persist
The guides to God lay down their path.
One dares not question why.
Else you will stir up Heaven's wrath,
be dead before you die
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from jmdg1954
I am sorry to explain, there are no printed pamphlets or brochures, distance or online courses, practical training, coaching or guidance, question papers, mark sheets, certificates, teachers or trainers for the FATE that is open only to the mortal dead of the earth. I conclude saying that further information on or about Heaven is available with God in Heaven, thank you.
Better message than on other works you publish...
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I am sorry to explain, there are no printed pamphlets or brochures, distance or online courses, practical training, coaching or guidance, question papers, mark sheets, certificates, teachers or trainers for the FATE that is open only to the mortal dead of the earth. I conclude saying that further information on or about Heaven is available with God in Heaven, thank you.
Better message than on other works you publish...
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from robina1978
You are right God is the one that decides if we go to Heaven or Hell. I hope to think most of us will end up in Heaven. I enjoyed your short story.
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You are right God is the one that decides if we go to Heaven or Hell. I hope to think most of us will end up in Heaven. I enjoyed your short story.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from Gooloom
Very good. I congratulate you on your imagination and style of writing. maybe what you write could very easily be true. who knows? But we all have our reasons, our ideas about heaven and hell. very well written and gives food for thought. goolooom
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Very good. I congratulate you on your imagination and style of writing. maybe what you write could very easily be true. who knows? But we all have our reasons, our ideas about heaven and hell. very well written and gives food for thought. goolooom
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this essay about the realities of Heaven and Hell and pondering where people will dwell. I enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this essay about the realities of Heaven and Hell and pondering where people will dwell. I enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from Rondeno
Your vision is a brave one, but is it your belief that the Saved are a chosen, select few? Or can man, by his own efforts, qualify for heaven?
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Your vision is a brave one, but is it your belief that the Saved are a chosen, select few? Or can man, by his own efforts, qualify for heaven?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from adewpearl
I am glad to answer to follow explanation onto your concluding phase of the question - a very difficult sentence to follow because of syntax
righteous living as per God words - God's
I'd like to see a bit more explanation of what is involved in failing to practice/maintain righteous living - what kinds of behavior sends some to Hell while others go happily to Heaven?
Brooke
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I am glad to answer to follow explanation onto your concluding phase of the question - a very difficult sentence to follow because of syntax
righteous living as per God words - God's
I'd like to see a bit more explanation of what is involved in failing to practice/maintain righteous living - what kinds of behavior sends some to Hell while others go happily to Heaven?
Brooke
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from Zue65
What a fictional work, inspired by a dream about the FATE examinees and the FATE qualifiers. Those who failed the test for they have not maintained righteous living are bound to Hell while qualifiers will soon find out the difference between the metaphoric heavens of the earth for mortal beings an God's Heaven run under the codes of heaven. To be a Fate Qualifier, a mortal have to die on earth. This sounds like Dante's Inferno, although the focus is more on heaven in your dream. I enjoyed this piece, God bless.
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What a fictional work, inspired by a dream about the FATE examinees and the FATE qualifiers. Those who failed the test for they have not maintained righteous living are bound to Hell while qualifiers will soon find out the difference between the metaphoric heavens of the earth for mortal beings an God's Heaven run under the codes of heaven. To be a Fate Qualifier, a mortal have to die on earth. This sounds like Dante's Inferno, although the focus is more on heaven in your dream. I enjoyed this piece, God bless.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from chasennov
'FATE - Fortune Admission Test Exam.' A great thought-provoking piece of work you have created here, my friend. I enjoyed the intricacies. Well done.
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'FATE - Fortune Admission Test Exam.' A great thought-provoking piece of work you have created here, my friend. I enjoyed the intricacies. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
Comment from The Death
Hello
It is very true that people always wish to go to Heaven,and there are many who will go to Hell
for the sins.
I liked your concept here very much,the FATE,and your notes have are really very interesting.
And that last part about pamphlets,certificates,etc is really funny.
It is an interesting work.
Regards
Shar-A
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Hello
It is very true that people always wish to go to Heaven,and there are many who will go to Hell
for the sins.
I liked your concept here very much,the FATE,and your notes have are really very interesting.
And that last part about pamphlets,certificates,etc is really funny.
It is an interesting work.
Regards
Shar-A
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
