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FATE -- Fortune Admission Test Exam

No escape from the FATE. Please read Notes. 262 words

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend life is guided by fate but things are just that little better if we believe yes we will go to heaven well done again regards Jill

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

Comment from sibhus
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Hmmm, somebody hasn't been reading there scritures, now have they. What is death but etenal sleep, and on judgement day God will call forth all those that He remembers.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

Comment from Raver
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What a weird dream. All I know is that we will all find out if there is a heaven or hell when we pass on. However, life can be heaven or hell depending on your life experiences.

Good post.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

Comment from Gungalo
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FATE eh? Well since there is no way to go to heaven and return I'll base my beliefs on faith. Hard to have all the questions answered while here on earth.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from kiwijenny
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Oh I want to go to heaven..... I do not want to be with the hell bound and down...I want to be on the narrow way...we don't have online courses , practical training , coaching but we do have our Bibles. I write in the margin of mine for my kids...I liked this
God bless

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from lindalcreel
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You do have some nice dreams. We all ponder our fate at some point in time. Hopefully we have done enough good in our lives that traveling the dark path won't be given any consideration. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is kind of interesting. I guess if it is fictional it should go under a fiction category, based on your notes. Maybe there should be another category added here, ha ha. I think a couple of articles are missing here in a few sentences.
The one I noticed the most was:
Rightly, I am glad to answer to follow explanation onto your concluding phase of the question.
I think I would put 'the' in front of 'explanation'

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from Benjamin_H
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Fantastic story. I really thoroughly enjoyed it. I believe that this story definitely connects to the ready and coveys its message clearly and effectively. I haven't seen a really good story that grabs my attention so well in a couple of weeks so thank for this piece of beautiful writing. Well worth a 5 star rating. Good work!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from 9999pool
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Who goes to heaven and who to hell, only God knows.
Everyone will think they qualify but what does the qualifications to heaven require?
Is there a heaven and have we seen one yet?
If we haven't, does it mean we will never get there.
What is in heaven - did God give us a vivid description of the place? If he hasn't - it is just a bright empty space of bliss - no more mortal feeling of anything?
So, this is fiction as well in this review, smiles. We will never know and even if we think heaven exist, we have not seen it physically or has paid a visit to it.
Whether we will go there after all our sins are counted - maybe no one will ever get there.
Cheerio, Ritchie.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a very philosophical piece of writing. It reminds me of the dialogues of Plato. It has the same philosophical subject matter as The Republic and Critias. This is a monologue however, but it is in the same mould. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013