Sewn Into the Sky
Viewing comments for Prologue "Searching for Tomorrow"Collection of Free Style Poetry
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Comment from kiwijenny
I love this Gregory, I hadn't heard you in a while.. I have missed your great turn of phrase and the depth to which I think reading your poetry...it is a great gift you have.....great that was a Yoda.
God bless my friend
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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I love this Gregory, I hadn't heard you in a while.. I have missed your great turn of phrase and the depth to which I think reading your poetry...it is a great gift you have.....great that was a Yoda.
God bless my friend
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Jenny. I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :) truly, thank you, I miss hearing from you too.
Comment from olivia22
Searching for tomorrow interesting. i reached for a teasing tomorrow but sink between the fingers of tonight.great work.keep writing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Searching for tomorrow interesting. i reached for a teasing tomorrow but sink between the fingers of tonight.great work.keep writing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
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you are most welcome
Comment from Jade Lawson
I reach for a teasing tomorrow
but sink between the fingers of tonight... this is beautiful.
You try to disguise your thoughts, forget your dreams but they haunt your mind, leading you into sadness, uncertainty. You look for you endlessly.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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I reach for a teasing tomorrow
but sink between the fingers of tonight... this is beautiful.
You try to disguise your thoughts, forget your dreams but they haunt your mind, leading you into sadness, uncertainty. You look for you endlessly.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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You got it spot on. Look for you endlessly. That's poetic. I like your reviews.
I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
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Glad you enjoyed my review. Please take care of yourself. I'm doing a break about writing poetry, I'm writing my novel at the moment, and feel I can't concentrate on two projects at the same time. I'll be back to finish my book of poetry when the novel is finished.
Comment from ravenblack
My heart squeezes for a purpose I cannot find- squeezes very effective, denoting panic or feeling crushed, the beat no longer your friend, but a cold robotic almost like being merely life support. Sounds like you are in a dark place. I hope the light finds you.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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My heart squeezes for a purpose I cannot find- squeezes very effective, denoting panic or feeling crushed, the beat no longer your friend, but a cold robotic almost like being merely life support. Sounds like you are in a dark place. I hope the light finds you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much. It Is I know it is
I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
Comment from IndianaIrish
Greg, I love that you give different poetry forms a try, but your free verse is when you truly shine. Your emotion is wrapped around these words and so easy to share with you. Your alliteration is wonderful and your final line is a heart grabber for sure.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Greg, I love that you give different poetry forms a try, but your free verse is when you truly shine. Your emotion is wrapped around these words and so easy to share with you. Your alliteration is wonderful and your final line is a heart grabber for sure.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Wow I am SO IMMENSELY grateful for this review. You have no idea how much that means to me. Especially this one. Thank you with all my heart Karyn. I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
Comment from emjaihammond
Greg, this is really wonderful. I loved each line more than the last, always thinking this one is my favorite. You really out-did yourself with this very emotional poem. I think I understand the serious nature of this, and it really pulls my emotions. I may have felt this way too sometimes. Great work of art.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Greg, this is really wonderful. I loved each line more than the last, always thinking this one is my favorite. You really out-did yourself with this very emotional poem. I think I understand the serious nature of this, and it really pulls my emotions. I may have felt this way too sometimes. Great work of art.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you. Its nice really nice to be able to relate to a like mind. I'm so humbled and so very very honored. Thank you. I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
Comment from poesyapprentice
It really isn't very often that I read a piece and just go "WoW" because the ending of the piece just...you know, sad to say, but I can't find the right words. It has such impact. You really feel the heartcry in the last line. perfect culmination to a great work. Love your imagery, as always. : )
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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It really isn't very often that I read a piece and just go "WoW" because the ending of the piece just...you know, sad to say, but I can't find the right words. It has such impact. You really feel the heartcry in the last line. perfect culmination to a great work. Love your imagery, as always. : )
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much. Again. Thank you.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Searching for tomorrow .... seems elusive, just out of reach, but there is hope. These are the messages conveyed to this reader via your poem GregoryCody.
Fave lines ... "my heart squeezes for a purpose I cannot find" & "a constant beat taunting, tapping blind". Great imagery created for the reader with your words. Good use of alliteration with "wishes within a whispered" and "slippery sleep".
A thought provoking poem. Well done GregoryCody!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Searching for tomorrow .... seems elusive, just out of reach, but there is hope. These are the messages conveyed to this reader via your poem GregoryCody.
Fave lines ... "my heart squeezes for a purpose I cannot find" & "a constant beat taunting, tapping blind". Great imagery created for the reader with your words. Good use of alliteration with "wishes within a whispered" and "slippery sleep".
A thought provoking poem. Well done GregoryCody!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Connie. So much. You're awesome. I'm sorry its been a while to get back to you, I've been dealing with some things. Getting better though :)
Comment from NicciFaye
This is a six...and i dont have any to give...very powerful metaphoric lines of thought. The first line alone was pleasing to my thoughts. I love the alliteration of letters throughout this. ...well written.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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This is a six...and i dont have any to give...very powerful metaphoric lines of thought. The first line alone was pleasing to my thoughts. I love the alliteration of letters throughout this. ...well written.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much Nicci, I wasn't really expecting anyone to review it so Im so grateful you did. This was just raw emotion that needed to come out and writing is the only way I have to vent I guess. I didn't even think about a certificate, I'm sorry. Next one for sure. You're great, thank you so much.
Comment from Treischel
A free style poem of powerful emotion that taunts the heart "for a purpose it cannot find." Compelling soul searching that churns and spins in the ashes of your dreams. Your have a poets heart that expresses thoughts eloquently. Here you use unique structure to help convey the motion in mimicked jagged lines. Such turmoil! Nicely done!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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A free style poem of powerful emotion that taunts the heart "for a purpose it cannot find." Compelling soul searching that churns and spins in the ashes of your dreams. Your have a poets heart that expresses thoughts eloquently. Here you use unique structure to help convey the motion in mimicked jagged lines. Such turmoil! Nicely done!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much. Truly that means a lot coming from you. Its strange how emotions come out in poetry. Its the only true way to express myself. I'm so appreciative, gives me confidence as a poet. Hey, that's the first time I've referred to myself as that. ;) see, you Do give me confidence!
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You are a poet. Never doubt it.
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Thank you. Sincerely.
