Choose War or Peace
Pl read Author Notes. A Non-Fiction in 141 words. Words invi89 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
i agree with you i have come to realise that the cheapest and the most unwanted thing in life is an advice.if only we didnt have negative words .then we wouldnt have used them.
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i agree with you i have come to realise that the cheapest and the most unwanted thing in life is an advice.if only we didnt have negative words .then we wouldnt have used them.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Uniqusatya
Hey clever you...
You seem to make us use good words only by your work :)
kidding..
Yes agree that words decide war or peace but the virtue is the one which make up the words,so it is equally important.
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Hey clever you...
You seem to make us use good words only by your work :)
kidding..
Yes agree that words decide war or peace but the virtue is the one which make up the words,so it is equally important.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is interesting, but you used far too much repetition, saying essentially the same things over and over using different wording. Also, science and other pursuits are not just words, but experimentation, math, analysis and insight, so that part makes little sense.
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This is interesting, but you used far too much repetition, saying essentially the same things over and over using different wording. Also, science and other pursuits are not just words, but experimentation, math, analysis and insight, so that part makes little sense.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from MelReyn
I feel like this is confucius talking to me. There is wisdom to this-- fortune cookie wisdom. And like the messages in fortune cookies, this feels like broken, incomplete english. I have no quarrel with your message. I think it's good, common sense advice.
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I feel like this is confucius talking to me. There is wisdom to this-- fortune cookie wisdom. And like the messages in fortune cookies, this feels like broken, incomplete english. I have no quarrel with your message. I think it's good, common sense advice.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Shelby~thePoet
Hi, words speak of truth or deceit, choose your weapon wisely and draw or perhaps do not draw but history always repeats itself ...of the facts, I enjoyed this!
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Hi, words speak of truth or deceit, choose your weapon wisely and draw or perhaps do not draw but history always repeats itself ...of the facts, I enjoyed this!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from garrymc5
Words invite wars or restore peace. ---BUT they could od neither.
Devils or fools never listen to the wise, righteous or divine words ---But the real skill is telling the difference, being able to distinguish between them.
What you describe is the role of diplomacy.
True, diplomacy can avoid most wars.
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Words invite wars or restore peace. ---BUT they could od neither.
Devils or fools never listen to the wise, righteous or divine words ---But the real skill is telling the difference, being able to distinguish between them.
What you describe is the role of diplomacy.
True, diplomacy can avoid most wars.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from coolcatkev
You said this perfectly! I have been trying so hard over the past few years to gain this wisdom, amazing the power of a kind word. Thanks for sharing.
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You said this perfectly! I have been trying so hard over the past few years to gain this wisdom, amazing the power of a kind word. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from Sam Manilla
I liked this better than the long one. Though this still has some strange wording. It made more sense overall and you seem to have a theme here. My favoeite line was abour curtesy being free and buying so much. That one line did it for me. Write on!
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I liked this better than the long one. Though this still has some strange wording. It made more sense overall and you seem to have a theme here. My favoeite line was abour curtesy being free and buying so much. That one line did it for me. Write on!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from wierdgrace
Courtesy costs nothing but buys everything.
Ignorance of wise use of words is of no excuse.
These are just two of my favorites, yet, all are truth, in so many ways,
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Courtesy costs nothing but buys everything.
Ignorance of wise use of words is of no excuse.
These are just two of my favorites, yet, all are truth, in so many ways,
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from marijmd
Use words either to kiss war or peace. - curious do you mean to kiss war or to kiss, war. It makes the read something different.
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Use words either to kiss war or peace. - curious do you mean to kiss war or to kiss, war. It makes the read something different.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
