Choose War or Peace
Pl read Author Notes. A Non-Fiction in 141 words. Words invi89 total reviews
Comment from ccmwriter
I particularly like, "Choice is yours. Use words either to kiss war or peace." I like your word and think they need to be read by many. They are wise and "practicably" written. I wish this could be put into a poem. I seems to cry out "Poetry, Poetry."
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I particularly like, "Choice is yours. Use words either to kiss war or peace." I like your word and think they need to be read by many. They are wise and "practicably" written. I wish this could be put into a poem. I seems to cry out "Poetry, Poetry."
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
Comment from mrsmajor
I found this interesting piece, to be quite redundant in thought...Words are only as good as the one that uses them,
Wisdom comes from God..
Thanks for sharing,
Warmly,
Victoria
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I found this interesting piece, to be quite redundant in thought...Words are only as good as the one that uses them,
Wisdom comes from God..
Thanks for sharing,
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
Comment from Jonesy
Much better than the other I read from this author regarding SPAG, although the message is hard to decipher. I guess it's words can cause harm or help.
One thing the author should reconsider is the arrogance. This in the author notes:
"Enjoy the essence of the work."
The author doesn't get to decide if others enjoy their work, the readers do.
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Much better than the other I read from this author regarding SPAG, although the message is hard to decipher. I guess it's words can cause harm or help.
One thing the author should reconsider is the arrogance. This in the author notes:
"Enjoy the essence of the work."
The author doesn't get to decide if others enjoy their work, the readers do.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
Comment from Caressa_08
Your message rings true & good advice to us & in today's society of too much war & not enough peace, that keeps the Earth in turmoil...Yes words can contribute to one or the other...So, it is a wise think to think before using words foolishly...
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Your message rings true & good advice to us & in today's society of too much war & not enough peace, that keeps the Earth in turmoil...Yes words can contribute to one or the other...So, it is a wise think to think before using words foolishly...
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
Comment from amahra
I agree that words should be used wisely, but wise choice of words is not the cure-all. (not that you said it was.) But sometimes using words wisely is not enough, especially when wise words are mistaking for insults, then war still may ensue. Just a few things below.
[did you mean to say, "be mad to live or be [made] to live?]
Use words unwisely and invite wars, battles, confrontations, disputes, discords or tussles and be mad to live isolated, solitary, stressed, strained or frustrated.
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I agree that words should be used wisely, but wise choice of words is not the cure-all. (not that you said it was.) But sometimes using words wisely is not enough, especially when wise words are mistaking for insults, then war still may ensue. Just a few things below.
[did you mean to say, "be mad to live or be [made] to live?]
Use words unwisely and invite wars, battles, confrontations, disputes, discords or tussles and be mad to live isolated, solitary, stressed, strained or frustrated.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from angelmagnet
You are very clear about your personal and your historical knowledge of the power of words. With only a little more research, you might have discovered that even the Bible prohibits evil speech. They say when you gossip you kill three - yourself, the one listening, and the one of whom you speak.
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You are very clear about your personal and your historical knowledge of the power of words. With only a little more research, you might have discovered that even the Bible prohibits evil speech. They say when you gossip you kill three - yourself, the one listening, and the one of whom you speak.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from NicciFaye
Like you said in this write, it is HIGHLY important to use the right words when talking, and even thinking. The power of the tongue is one that a lot of people don't know about, but the ripple effects can be good or bad.
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Like you said in this write, it is HIGHLY important to use the right words when talking, and even thinking. The power of the tongue is one that a lot of people don't know about, but the ripple effects can be good or bad.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from writerwish
True. How powerful words can be. But this kind of wisdom we can't get from a school. We can get from another's example and by being shown love. It reminded me of of a song 'Let there be peace on earth and let it begin with me. I heard it at a HS graduation. Thanks for sharing. Great muse.
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True. How powerful words can be. But this kind of wisdom we can't get from a school. We can get from another's example and by being shown love. It reminded me of of a song 'Let there be peace on earth and let it begin with me. I heard it at a HS graduation. Thanks for sharing. Great muse.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from William Walz
Since you never reply to any of your reviews, I guess I can say just about anything I want. You seem to be hung up on the notion of words being like God. Words are often empty, and meaningless. Our actions is how we will be eventually judged. Can't really see the point in any of these "word" posts.
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Since you never reply to any of your reviews, I guess I can say just about anything I want. You seem to be hung up on the notion of words being like God. Words are often empty, and meaningless. Our actions is how we will be eventually judged. Can't really see the point in any of these "word" posts.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Rmocruz
Use of positive reinforcement is apparent throughout.
Alliteration is effectively employed. Words are often
interpreted liberally, and to perhaps one's advantage.
Powerful writing.
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Use of positive reinforcement is apparent throughout.
Alliteration is effectively employed. Words are often
interpreted liberally, and to perhaps one's advantage.
Powerful writing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
