Skinny Dipping
Don't go skinny dipping with the sea creatures54 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I love poetry which makes me smile, and this one did. On seeing you sketch, I tried to remember where and when I posed for you, I then glanced in the mirror and stopped dreaming. A delightful and fun-filled write.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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I love poetry which makes me smile, and this one did. On seeing you sketch, I tried to remember where and when I posed for you, I then glanced in the mirror and stopped dreaming. A delightful and fun-filled write.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you Bob, I glad you got a smile. I got one as well from you comment of trying to remember when you posed for me.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This Gertrude poem, Skinny Dipping, is a fun and active ditty that finds the speaker risking dangling extremities in the surf and the disdain of society as he naked streaking is not tolerated. Friends?
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This Gertrude poem, Skinny Dipping, is a fun and active ditty that finds the speaker risking dangling extremities in the surf and the disdain of society as he naked streaking is not tolerated. Friends?
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you Bill, I'm glad you found my little poem fun. I seem to like rereading it myself or may I just like looking at the picture.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, I certainly got a kick out of this poem, so much so that it almost makes me think totally different about poetry. What is seemingly stiff and pompous to me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Yes, I certainly got a kick out of this poem, so much so that it almost makes me think totally different about poetry. What is seemingly stiff and pompous to me. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you Ric. I didn't think you'd find this one stiff or pompous.
Beth
Comment from Jill D
' Sitting in the Pokey' Lol! This is a brilliant poem and so funny. I love it! It's been a while since I had a 'Dip in the
Nip' ;)
All the best!
Jill:)
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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' Sitting in the Pokey' Lol! This is a brilliant poem and so funny. I love it! It's been a while since I had a 'Dip in the
Nip' ;)
All the best!
Jill:)
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank Jill, I'm gald you found my poem funny.
Beth
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Humorous topic and I could almost but not quite "see" everything. The metre sounds a bit complex but you have succeeded and there is a good flow. However I am left wondering about the outcome, after the unfortunate abandonment by friends! lol. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Lol. Humorous topic and I could almost but not quite "see" everything. The metre sounds a bit complex but you have succeeded and there is a good flow. However I am left wondering about the outcome, after the unfortunate abandonment by friends! lol. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you Wendy. I glad you got a chuckle from my poem. Hopefully so of our frends will not abandon us.
Beth
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked you poem. It was very descriptive and funny. I have ever heard of this type of poem. I thought it was well written. Great job on this poem
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I liked you poem. It was very descriptive and funny. I have ever heard of this type of poem. I thought it was well written. Great job on this poem
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you Brenda. I appreciate the reveiw. I'm glad you enjoyed this ane thought it was funny.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for reposting this with us. I'm not into skinny dipping. A few times I attempted to swim in lakes, I struggles because of fish nipping or touching me. LOL I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for reposting this with us. I'm not into skinny dipping. A few times I attempted to swim in lakes, I struggles because of fish nipping or touching me. LOL I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you Barbara. I've never skinny dipped. I'm too modest to get undressed the the ladies locker room. I would be upset if anything touched me in the water.
Beth
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a tense poem about running naked and being put in the cell. There was no one to bail the man out even though he was handsome as can be. Enjoyed your story-like poem.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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What a tense poem about running naked and being put in the cell. There was no one to bail the man out even though he was handsome as can be. Enjoyed your story-like poem.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you Rosemary. I have to read this poem every now and then. I"m not sure if it is the rhythm of the poem or the man that seems to draw me back to it. Thank you for the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Begin Again
It must have been one of those times, I fell off the face of the earth because I missed this one. I do remember Mike being in a coma for three months....but I am glad I caught it now. Quite the picture, and the words were so true... especially about friends disappearing when you really need them. WEll done and thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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It must have been one of those times, I fell off the face of the earth because I missed this one. I do remember Mike being in a coma for three months....but I am glad I caught it now. Quite the picture, and the words were so true... especially about friends disappearing when you really need them. WEll done and thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you Carol. I read the reviews and not a one of those people are still with FanStory.
Beth
Comment from Jim Wile
I loved this, Beth. That is such a fun meter and rhyme scheme, and you followed it perfectly. Quite a challenge. That was an amusing topic too, as how does he explain his way out of this in a believable manner? I guess the moral is, don't skinny dip in the ocean!
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I loved this, Beth. That is such a fun meter and rhyme scheme, and you followed it perfectly. Quite a challenge. That was an amusing topic too, as how does he explain his way out of this in a believable manner? I guess the moral is, don't skinny dip in the ocean!
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you Jim. I glae you likef my Poem. I enjoy humorous poem aner I like the rihythm of that format so I thought it was worth reposting.
Beth
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Thank you Jim. I glae you likef my Poem. I enjoy humorous poem aner I like the rihythm of that format so I thought it was worth reposting.
Beth
