The Newest Rocker
Gotta start them young16 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I liked this fun piece you bring your grandsons personality through well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend I liked this fun piece you bring your grandsons personality through well I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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He's my little rocker, well maybe someday. Thank you for reading and commenting. John
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
Loved this dialogue banter and to think the picture inspired it. Excellent writing in so many ways, I would end up writing an essay on it. Siffice to say, John, I think you 'rocked' with this piece. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Loved this dialogue banter and to think the picture inspired it. Excellent writing in so many ways, I would end up writing an essay on it. Siffice to say, John, I think you 'rocked' with this piece. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Awesome. Thank you for the six stars. I really appreciate your encouragement.
John
Comment from Aussie
What a terrific photo of Ryder and the guitar that is bigger than he is; kids have their own way of doing things and he certainly knows what he wanted - never did see Mickey Mouse play a guitar, you? I liked your little script that makes life worthwhile - simple and cute.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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What a terrific photo of Ryder and the guitar that is bigger than he is; kids have their own way of doing things and he certainly knows what he wanted - never did see Mickey Mouse play a guitar, you? I liked your little script that makes life worthwhile - simple and cute.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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In some daily cartoons he did. Thank you for reading and sharing. Always appreciated... John
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I think I do remember a ukulele? Watched the show every day as a youngster. Annette Funicello died a while ago.
Comment from Joe Hudson
If I had six stars you would have gotten them! But riddle me this....how does he know about Jimi Hendrix, Clapton, etc? Love the story .,....great job!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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If I had six stars you would have gotten them! But riddle me this....how does he know about Jimi Hendrix, Clapton, etc? Love the story .,....great job!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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He's my grandson, a smart laddie. You'd be amazed what a six month old knows today. Hahaha.
Thanks for the review Joe, always appreciated.
Comment from Val Crisson
I love Ryder stories, John, you must love these little guys so much. For this was a completely believable story, I had to transcend a bit but it was adorable. Your sentences are getting stronger and stronger.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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I love Ryder stories, John, you must love these little guys so much. For this was a completely believable story, I had to transcend a bit but it was adorable. Your sentences are getting stronger and stronger.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Val, thank you for reading this and sharing your thoughts. Your compliment goes the extra distance. John
Comment from Gracie619
lol - What a great picture! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the entire writing, but especially the surprise ending with Mickey Mouse. Way to end!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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lol - What a great picture! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the entire writing, but especially the surprise ending with Mickey Mouse. Way to end!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thank you again for stopping by here as well. Mickey Mouse all the way... John
Comment from judiverse
Hi! This is irresistibly cute. I love the dialogue with Ryder. The little guy sure knows his guitarists. Love the way he describes them. It's cute when he asks, "How'my doin so far?" It sounds right that he would want to play the guitar like Mickey Mouse. Excellent job. judiverse
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Hi! This is irresistibly cute. I love the dialogue with Ryder. The little guy sure knows his guitarists. Love the way he describes them. It's cute when he asks, "How'my doin so far?" It sounds right that he would want to play the guitar like Mickey Mouse. Excellent job. judiverse
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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judiverse, thank you for your time. With a sister two years old, he is subjected to Mickey Mouse quite often (nothing wrong there). Thanks again, John
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Mickey Mouse does make an impression. You're so welcome, John. Cute story. judi
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi John,
What a fabulous picture of Ryder. You never know, in years from now you might have a Jimi Hendrix in the family. The dialogue and conversation you used worked well with the picture.
Bye
Rosalyne
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Hi John,
What a fabulous picture of Ryder. You never know, in years from now you might have a Jimi Hendrix in the family. The dialogue and conversation you used worked well with the picture.
Bye
Rosalyne
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thank you, Rosalyne, for your time to review this. Only time will tell what Mr. Ryder will do, but in the meantime, he has to try it all (when he's older of course). John
Comment from IndianaIrish
ROCK ON, RYDER!!
Very cute story, John, and I love that he wants to play riffs like Mickey Mouse instead of Jimmy Page. The picture is adorable .just one direct address that needs a comma...
Is that so(,) young man?
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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ROCK ON, RYDER!!
Very cute story, John, and I love that he wants to play riffs like Mickey Mouse instead of Jimmy Page. The picture is adorable .just one direct address that needs a comma...
Is that so(,) young man?
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thank you Karyn, now Aiden is mad at me because I didn't write one for her. So back to the drawing board...
Johnny
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, John. He's cute. Looks like you've had fun with this picture. Thank you for sharing this picture and story with us. I enjoyed the story and the picture. He's really starting very young. LOL.
April
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Hi, John. He's cute. Looks like you've had fun with this picture. Thank you for sharing this picture and story with us. I enjoyed the story and the picture. He's really starting very young. LOL.
April
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thank you April. He is adorable. But what Grandfather wouldn't say that, right? I don't foresee any guitar lessons in the near future... maybe soccer?
Thanks again, John
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LOL. :o) You're welcome.
