~His All-He Gave~.
He died and was resurrected, for you & me...101 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
During one of my Bible study sessions, a Christian doctor came gave a talk about what Jesus's body went through. Your poem brought that back to me.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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During one of my Bible study sessions, a Christian doctor came gave a talk about what Jesus's body went through. Your poem brought that back to me.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, Barbara. I had to do this one justice, I simply had to. I am happy that it brought such recollection and reflection...
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Dean,
You have written yet another superb poem and as usual your presentation is beautiful. I found the music haunting and perfect for this piece. The rhyming scheme is flawless and your well chosen words give me a perfect image of Jesus on the cross. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Dean,
You have written yet another superb poem and as usual your presentation is beautiful. I found the music haunting and perfect for this piece. The rhyming scheme is flawless and your well chosen words give me a perfect image of Jesus on the cross. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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What a wonderful compliment, chey. I am very grateful. Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A vivid passionately worded truth of crucifixion of Son of God Lord Jesus Christ who took our sins and offered our righteous living a way to heaven and He gave his all dedicated to mankind, so nicely retold. 06/721
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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A vivid passionately worded truth of crucifixion of Son of God Lord Jesus Christ who took our sins and offered our righteous living a way to heaven and He gave his all dedicated to mankind, so nicely retold. 06/721
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Alcreator Litt Dear. I truly appreciate you reading & reviewing this one for me...
Comment from donnadiann
The poem itself is spiritual, true, and beautiful. Good use of rhyming and alliterations.., bloodied body...battered, bleeding. Well written with emotive tone. Nice slideshow:)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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The poem itself is spiritual, true, and beautiful. Good use of rhyming and alliterations.., bloodied body...battered, bleeding. Well written with emotive tone. Nice slideshow:)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, donnadiann. I am so pleased that you thought so...
Comment from Titan Black
You we're sure out to paint a graphic picture.
And you did just that. what I would like to know
Is how you get you poetic alliteration to flow like that?
You did your thing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You we're sure out to paint a graphic picture.
And you did just that. what I would like to know
Is how you get you poetic alliteration to flow like that?
You did your thing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hah, hey, your poetic alliteration ain't too bad either, my friend!
Seriously, thanks for the wonderful comments!
Comment from GaryCecil
Dean, you have done it again!
Another great poem from the man at hand, Dean Kuch! I think this will appeal to a ton of people, as already evident in the great reviews. Good luck in your future man, although, you don't need it. ;)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Dean, you have done it again!
Another great poem from the man at hand, Dean Kuch! I think this will appeal to a ton of people, as already evident in the great reviews. Good luck in your future man, although, you don't need it. ;)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Gary. I appreciate that, my friend!
Comment from Cedar
This certainly is an exceptional poem in every way. Just the presentation alone deserves a six. Then, add this fantastic spiritual poem and it deserves a seven, which is available, according to the number of exceptional ratings you receive. I believe there will be many, depending on the amount of promotion. You have a God given talent that should be shared with as many people as possible and not just Fanstory. I really believe that you have a great opportunity to boost your career as a writer, if you can make the right connections. In my opinion, this should win "poem of the month". Fantastic work. Bill
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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This certainly is an exceptional poem in every way. Just the presentation alone deserves a six. Then, add this fantastic spiritual poem and it deserves a seven, which is available, according to the number of exceptional ratings you receive. I believe there will be many, depending on the amount of promotion. You have a God given talent that should be shared with as many people as possible and not just Fanstory. I really believe that you have a great opportunity to boost your career as a writer, if you can make the right connections. In my opinion, this should win "poem of the month". Fantastic work. Bill
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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What a wonderful thing to say, Cedar, thank you. I am very happy that you liked it so much, and appreciate the outpouring of enthusiasm you show!
Comment from adewpearl
good use of mono-rhyming in each stanza
good alliteration in phrases like driven deeply
good assonance in gentle flesh
You deliver a powerful message of faith in good poetic form
Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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good use of mono-rhyming in each stanza
good alliteration in phrases like driven deeply
good assonance in gentle flesh
You deliver a powerful message of faith in good poetic form
Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Brooke. I appreciate that...
Comment from tbacha58
Oh Whoa Dean I heard about you from a very close friend, I read a lot of other poem, but this, I cant express how I felt, my heart felt like flying with the music, although so sad Jesus to be in so much pain, its amazing, is convincing, its art the way you write. Thank you so much. I am sure the priest will be proud of you. God Bless.Terry
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Oh Whoa Dean I heard about you from a very close friend, I read a lot of other poem, but this, I cant express how I felt, my heart felt like flying with the music, although so sad Jesus to be in so much pain, its amazing, is convincing, its art the way you write. Thank you so much. I am sure the priest will be proud of you. God Bless.Terry
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks, Terry, and thank your friend for steering you my way as well! I am very glad you enjoyed it. And, hey, don't be a stranger. My portfolio is always open...
Comment from write hand blue
I must give you top marks for quality.
Again you have matched the sound effects and the graphics perfectly. And created a superb story presented as a rhyming poem. You have done your friend proud... mel.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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I must give you top marks for quality.
Again you have matched the sound effects and the graphics perfectly. And created a superb story presented as a rhyming poem. You have done your friend proud... mel.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Mel, I appreciate your kind words. I imagine that I will hear all about it from him in just a few short hours at church. I pray you are right, that man has meant a great deal to me; almost like a second father.
Thanks so much, again...
