Comment from Sararb

Excellent

I loved Woodland wonders of which there are many. I loved this format, and I will have to try it out. Beautiful State park. Thanks for sharing this one. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013

Thank you too Sara. Yes. Give one a try.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

This is a sparkling gem of a read.

You excel when your love of nature shines through.

Magnificent alliteration ... my heart is humbled! :)

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

Thank you Sonali. I am pleased to touch you heart with a poem.

Comment from DRG24

Excellent

I really love this amazing poem!!! I wonder: what genius creates this form??? Lol just kidding!!!! Fantastic work with this wonderful piece and thanks for supporting my form!!!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

Thank you DRG24. Can't imagine!

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent 5A poetry. The required line/syllable format is followed. The alliteration is effective. The imagery is beautiful. The picture is beautiful and illustrates the poems theme excellently. I enjoyed this one.
Preston

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013

Thank you Preston.

Comment from lexairu

Excellent

I love this format. It is so true that nature somehow and anyhow relieves us of the burdens of life. It's like one way of God comforting us. I am loving alliterations too just like this one. I will try this in the future for sure.

Cheers
Lexi

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Thanks Lexi. Yes, I think you'd like it.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Enjoyable poem to read with alliteration running in every line (W, H, B). It is still considered a haiku coming in under 17-syllables. Good format. Nice visual imagery. Great!

Happy Saturday!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Sunnilcious.

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Sunnilcious.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Mankind feels so small, merely a speck, as he stands in awe of Mother Nature's splendor. That's as it should be. Being smaller, and realizing it, forces us to respect and appreciate such things. These beautiful, sixty-eight State Parks you've mentioned, the Grand Canyon, our beautiful, vast oceans and mountain ranges. Who are we, compared to such majesty?

Another wonderful poem, T., and a profound message as well.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Dean, yes, we are iNdignificant in the s heme of things, for sure.

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Dean, yes, we are iNdignificant in the s heme of things, for sure.

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

First excellent photography - looks like a picture from a postcard....Great 5A poem. I had cut and pasted some of your author notes in a word document so I can start collecting different poem types...I want to try this one....seems fun...

Beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Nicci.. It is fun.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Excellent!
A well-written poem of serene beauty as magnificent forests capture a spectacular moment in time.
A beautiful photograph, Tom.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you Capricorn. One of my favorite shots.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Woodland wonders,indeed that's a beautiful picture. That's a beautiful expressed poem, nice in form, Thanks for sharing it,God bless you,Lakeport.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thank you lakeport

reply by lakeport on 22-Jun-2013

your welcome.Lakeport.