Comment from Sararb

Excellent

Yummy! Makes we want a fresh crispy apple to munch on. A very interesting format that I enjoyed reading. You stirred up my appetite for a healthy snack of fresh fruit! Sararb

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013

Thank you Sara. Bon Appetite.

Comment from Maguy Daoud

Excellent

Nice new style my friend, it's so easy and it will helps most of all the children to learn new words and memorize them in the easiest way. I really learning from you a lot.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thank you Maguy. I a happy that you can take something from my poetry.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent unconventional verse that meets all of the conditions you stated for a tic-toe-tac toe poem. I like your experiments but I could not read the second and third lines diagonally.
Preston

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thank you Preston. Like you say. Experimenting.

Comment from Gypsy Starchild

Excellent

This is really neat! I wish that I had a six for you, because this is genius. :) I definitely want to give this a spin... It seems like it would be quite challenging, but fun... kinda like creating and working a puzzle at the same time...

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thank you Gypsy Starchild. I hope you do try one.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A beautiful photograh;
Your interesting Tic-tac-toe poem nicely complements these crisp pomes;
Great creaativiy in introducing a new format to Fanstory.
It is always easy to write about apples.
Excellent! I really enjoy reading! No doubt, a good work-out for the brain.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thanks much Capricorn. Give it a try if you like.

reply by Capricorn30 on 20-Jun-2013

I will definitely keep it in mind.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

My goodness we are being very inventive these days. Clever verse
and lots of fun to read. Enjoyable in all directions!
Robin :)

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thank you Robin. Glad you could enjoy it. In any direction. Just taking this brain out for a little exercise.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That's a cute poem. Nice style. Good message. Excellent work.

There an Apple Diet. I know a few people that did it. An apple 3 to 4 times per day. It trims the midsection because of the fiber. But it's the only fruit allowed. There's also a Banana Diet, but I'm unsure how that one works.

Have a great day!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thanks Sunnilicious. Yummy.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Oh this is great. If it were tomatoes instead of apples you could pick a tic tac tomato.. Oh I am so going to make up a format... Mine might be a little musty because it would demand a pun in every line... Or a three way pun. Oh you have gotten me excited. I love this
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Thank you kiwijenny. Happy to oblige!

reply by kiwijenny on 19-Jun-2013

Musty should have been nutsy..

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013

Don't you just hate autocorrect, sometimes?